Reviews for Mother Mother Ocean

Val Mora 2002-11-09 ch 1,	abuseYou have DEFINITELY got Trip's narration and speech habits down - I could hear Connor Trinneer's voice in my head as I read it (I hear dialogue and stuff in my head and I read), you had it all down so well. That's brilliant! ^_^ I liked this a lot!
JadziaKathryn 2002-09-09 ch 1,	abuseOf course, we know that Starfleet still has tactical officers in two hundred years, but they don't know that. This is creative and the perspective is great. I liked the part about Phlox's bat.
AnnaPhylactic 2002-09-07 ch 1,	abuseI like this. You've got the tone of Trip well -and Malcolm too. You've captured the distance that exists between M and the others. Nicely written.
Jazz 2002-09-06 ch 1, anon.	abusethis is very nice. you have found a good voice in trip; i'd like to see his thoughts (well, your thought ;-)) of the other characters...anyway, well done