this is adorable. i love it! The characters are perfect for their roles! Please continue this! It was a joy to read and I can't wait to see more of your work!

MERRY IS MINE. MINE. MINE!Because I'm Eowyn.

Firerising.

aw its so cute!

I love the realism of this story, each character seems be met on a personal level. It's easy to yourself to this story, but be careful that you don't pull yourself in too far, otherwise you lose sight of the intentions of the original idea of LOTR.

*record screech*

But who am I to talk? I luffs the story, Pippin. I didn't know you wrote this well. Good job! ^^

This is such a cute story! I love the idea of the story being told from a different point of view each chapter! very creative. Keep it up!

What's wrong with my Pippin? He's MINE! ALL MINE, PRECIOUS! oops got a little carried away there. oh the suspense is killing me! how could he be that sick if he didn't eat anything? >:-( (thinking face)

When do we get Sam's point of view? *grin*
Interesting premise. Don't be afraid to write a longer chapter or two.

Good Merry is really crazy right now. lol Glad you updated ^_^ Update soon plz!
~*Ice Ember*~

Oh no! Poor Pippin! Is he going to be okay?

Update soon please!

LOL If I knew who you was doing, that would be too much information... Anyway I like your stories, so keep updating. Oh, and I will say this...For your next story, come up with something more original that giving Pip a fever; that's getting old.
P.S. I like Billy too, but I like Dom more!

Aw. poor Pippin. it's so sad.

This is a great story, I really feel for Pippin. And the way you used the movie lines in a new context - brilliant. Keep up the great work!

ello ello ello! Yay for Pippin!! WooHoo!! More updates, and longer chapters!

oh my lord u have to update this soon!! I can't believe that i didn't find this until today!!!!!!! Oh and do u know exactly how much older Merry is than Pippin cuz i was just curious? Please update this soon!!!

Wonderful plot idea! Can't wait to see how you resolve the whole thing. And you do such a believable little-Pip. :)

morpheus

Not at all bad-you've captured the sort of ill,fevered feeling quite well-I really felt for Pippin. Merry's cute here. Not sure what your aim in making what seemed to all accounts a perfectly healthy hobbit,both in the book and the movie, seriously ill, but there we go...

Like the story, but the &%$#@$! computer tell me there are five chapters on it, but will only show me one! %*##$%^@&*! I'll try again later to see if it works. Good job! ^_^