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kat_fruit_basket
2009-08-14 . chapter 9
...You have a very passionate heart and great inspiration...that is what an author needs to have in order to make the author's readers enjoy the story...a job well done...plan to write another YukiRu, but i'm not forcing you to.Just when you want to...I...enjoyed the story.
:)
2009-04-23 . chapter 9
I love the fanfic :)
it's nice, and I love the last song :D
airaamay
2008-12-27 . chapter 9
YUKIRUU FOREVER! :D THIS IS AN AMMAAZZINNG FANFIC! (goes into "Ayame" mode) The DRAMA! The TEARS! The SUSPENSE! The LOVE! IT WAS WONDERFULY WOVEN INTO A MASTERPIECE OF YUKIRU-NESS.
AssassinedAngel
2008-11-26 . chapter 9
I thought Tohru was a bit extreme. Although separation and pain would warp her personality a bit, I doubt she'd be one to swear or drink.

Their relationship seemed rather rushed. Or their reunion rather. After rejecting Yuki's proposal, I wouldn't have expected her to accept it and sleep with him so soon, especially since they didn't clear up what happened in the past.

I think you're amazing at writing songs. I'm envious. "Say Goodbye" was beautiful. :]

Overall, a cute story, but the addition of Card Captor Sakura characters bothered me.

"I'm Heaven's fiancée, Sohma Yuki." This line was my favorite out of the whole story =D
Kita Lenne
2007-09-28 . chapter 9
Your story is truly touching and I haven't seen anything like it! There are very few writers that can write stories this good! (sry, commented too much on the music last review.) Looking forward to more stories; with anticipation that they'll be just as good, if not better, than this one!
Jynx
2007-09-28 . chapter 9
Sugoi! This is such an AWESOME fic! I luv it! You really wrote "Say Goodbye" all by yourself?! You rule!! If there's music to it, could ya email it to me? That and "Heaven is"; tell your friend that she's fantastic! You both have great potential! I look forward to any and all stories that you have yet to write (especially Yukiru!)! Keep it up!
SilverYouko300
2007-07-17 . chapter 9
Aw, so cute! Drama in previous chapters may have nearly killed me, but it was all worth the ending. I loved it!
SilverYouko300
2007-07-17 . chapter 1
Your writing is really great! If I didn't have to go to work, I'd continue reading in a heartbeat. So for now I'll add this to my favorite stories so I can return later and read. ^^ I love it!
sakuriot
2007-04-10 . chapter 9
great fic ! awesome job ^__^
Green Animelover
2007-01-24 . chapter 9
loved it
gentledespair-
2006-11-26 . chapter 9
Ek! I loved this fic! And I love you! Well, not Yuki-Tohru that kinda love-love, but what I mean is that I really appreciate the good writing. Songs are cool, too, say thanks to your friends for me :D I gonna go read other fics now, or check your others out :)
whatevergirl
2006-10-12 . chapter 9
*favs* beautiful! i loved it all! :)
Saffy
2006-03-05 . chapter 1
... it was okay. i hope there is going to be more...
Yuuki Toshi
2006-01-23 . chapter 9
excuse me while i go cry my eyes out cause that was just beautiful
Freederth
2005-09-29 . chapter 9
One of the best stories that I've read 'till now... very romantic... very fluffy.. beutiful
OK that's all..
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