Fantastic story! I should be asleep now, but I just couldn't stop reading. I gotta check to see if you have any others.

A really great story. It has everything a story needs. Thanks!

Great story! I love it... read it twice...

Great story! I did notice, though, that quite a few of the times when people were speaking you didn't use contractions, making the sentence sound more unnatural. For example: "Nick, I am sorry, but perhaps you should leave. I will see you tomorrow." To me, a more natural way of saying that would be: "Nick, I'm sorry, but perhaps you should leave. I'll see you tomorrow."

Just my two cents; I really did enjoy the story!

Oh, my gosh! A truly riveting fanfic! I enjoyed it so immensely, admired its length, and you maintained great canon. I was only distracted by the profanity ( , , etc.). The rape scenes were okay, because there wasn't anything so very graphic...it was only implied. I just rarely remember Lee cursing. I really enjoyed this story, though. It was fantastic, and I would have taped it had it been aired (to watch over, and over, and over again!).

Way to go!

I'll never understand why Lee likes Amanda. Further, I will never understand why fic writers like her too. But as for the style of writing and the plot, I give you thumbs up.

Nice piece! Very engrossing! Loved it! You have some big spaces, though... Hehehe. Wonderful writing, and very realistic to the series

I liked everything about it...continuity was excellent -format was great...easy to read..What more can I say! Good job!

I loved this story. You depicted Amanda and Lee perfectly. Amanda is a lot stronger than people think. And Lee has always been protective of her. Keep up the good job.

Excellent! My heart is still pounding a mile a minute. I can't want to read anything else you write. This was wonderful.

I'm on the edge of my seat. I'm looking forward to reading the 3rd part. You've written a very good, creepy bad guy. But, I love the way Lee wants to protect Amanda. This is excellent.

Good story. Very suspenseful and scary. I can't wait to read the rest of it.

THis was one of the most amzing stories i have read. I could see each and every detail. Kinda spooky, but a great read none the less.

One of the things that made this story so scary, is that there really are demented psycho-paths out there that would do hunt people down like this.

Diane-many thanks for writing this superb story. Wonderful characterizations, great supporting characters, believeable dialogue, and incredible plot. You managed to sustain the suspense throughout. And when I finished it, I realized I had that same tense feeling I get in my stomach when I watch a really riveting suspense movie-kind of like, "OK, it's over now, you can relax and breathe again. It was just a story." I hope you are working on your next story as I can't wait to read it. Sincerely, Linda