Interesting story, I liked the teleplay format, the song titles just being stuck in there were a little abrupt and distracted me more than enhanced my appreciation of what I was reading, maybe you could include the particular lyric you liked for that time in quotes or have a radi oplaying softly in the background in the fic with the songs u wanted. I'm really glad I read this, reminded me of how much I loved Felicity and Noel and your dialogue is spot on. Sounded just like them :)

That was really good, and so sweet. I REALLY HATED THE ACTUAL SEASON FINALE. So it was nice to see Felicity and Ben together for once, and not only as a one night stand. I did have one minor problem with this story. There was no spacing. My head was starting to hurt, reading all those words together. Overall the story was great, but the spacing....well you'll work on it, for the next story that I'll be waiting to read from you.