Awesome story. Captured very well. I about sporfled when I read the "Barney" spoof that Mike showed, though, after the BS&P crack. Perfect!

So, having read one story, I've decided to go on and read the rest. So far, I am really, really impressed with your writing skills, plot and character development, dialogue...I could continue.

I really like this story so far - all the characters ring true, all the attempts at humor are successful (no "groaner" jokes), and I caught the reference to "Prince of Persia" - a classic, and one of my old favorites. You also integrate the computer terms very well, something that I have trouble with.

I *do* have a couple of problems with it, though. Technical problems - your grammar and spelling are much better than the usual fare of the fanfic world (which is in itself commendable), but there are a few errors. You might want to give this a careful re-read for inconsistencies and typos (some of them really mixed me up) and correct them.

Also, you mixed up "its" and "it's" a few times - the former indicates posession, as in "belonging to it," and the latter is a contraction of "it is." Sorry to be so nit-picky about it, but it's just a pet peeve of mine. You might want to fix that too. That's one of the nice things about fanfics - when you make a mistake, it's easy to change the "published" version. :)

Other than that, it's perfect - and I can honestly say that it's one of the best fics I've ever read. ;D

holy jeez that was a long freakin' chapter. i wonder if ch.2 is like that? well im off to read it now anywho

Wow. You've done an amazing job here. The characterizations are great, and you've dealt with the relationships in a mature and caring manner. Great job!

I think this set of fanfiction was one of the first I read when I came to fanfiction.net. I really liked then, and now rereading it (I know, I have no life:)), I'm noticing so many little things, like how you really make Phong a 'full' character. After reading plenty of other Reboot fanfics, this has to be one of the better ones out their, it ranks right up there with LadyBard, (and sinceher Deamon fics are one of my favorite stories of all time, you know that's high praise. One ? though, why haven't you written any more Reboot fics. You really do well with Phong's character, and I have yet to see that be done well.

Wow. This fanfiction is awesome. The characterizations were terrific, and the interactions and reconciliation between Matrix and Enzo was very interesting to read and was (IMO) the highlight of the story although it benefits from many other good points. My only complaint was Matrix in the game: sure, he does use brute force over brains most of the time, but after such a long time in the games he surely would've had to gain more experience and game smarts than was shown in that section. Still, that's my only complaint about this story. Reading it was a wonderful delight. It's one of the best Reboot fanfics I've read.

:-) Very good story! ~J~

I haven't yet read the sequels to this story, but I thought I'd drop you a quick line to say how much I enjoyed this one. Aside from getting the characterizations dead on, you managed to tie up most of the loose-ends that the show leaves (aside from the major loose-end of Daemon). Your resolutions among the characters were all very touching, and I can honestly say that this is currently my favorite piece of Reboot fanfiction. Keep on writing and thanks for the great story!

I love the way you write! This fanfic captures the essences of each of the characters, and everything is alphanumeric - just like on the show!

Genius, encore, encore. This is an alphanumeric look into what a sort of Season 4 would be. If this were the plot for the real Season 4, I would have no argument! I look forward to reading the rest of your work. ~Trisana McGraw~

*laughs* Wicked cool story, person! I hope ye write more! THESE ARE GREAT!!!!!!!!!! *skips off to read the rest of the stuff*

WICKED GOOD!

That was an awesome fic. Very long, and it was just like watching the show. Good job! I'm off to read part 2 now...

Very good, I loved it.