I want to say that you have a great idea with what you are writing, but everything happens too quickly, and half the time I dont know who's talking

Love the story.

Wow, this story is long, I haven't read it yet but i LOVE Dragoon OC'S! Judginh by the number of reviews, this story won't be a let down. Hey I was thinking about making a Dragoon OC story using me and other real students from my school. It would be set in modern times but they would have to travel back to the old times to discover their origins as dragoons. Tell me what you think, I'm going to print out your story in school. I hope the printer is quiet cuz it's going to be printing like NO TOMORROW! Lol!

Well this is my first time to come to this site and this is the first story I have read. Might I just say that you did a very good job on this story. Very original and the characters for the most part were just awesome. I hate to be another person to beg, but I would greatly appreciate it if you got around to finishing this story. And to the people who keep saying that there should have been a love triangle between Dawn, Rayen, and Kyra need to realize that Dawn is for Phil.

you do realize its been almost 2 YEARS since you last updated this story, any chance you can finish it soon, thanks and if not, GOD DAMN YOU, YOU QUITTING...QUITTER(srry i had to do a phill-esque temper tantrum)

not bad

sweet but hussy please hurry

I just finally finished re-reading Rebirth. This last chapter was rather confusing compared to the other chapters, and rather sad. I still really hope that you make the fic a love triangle between Rayen, Kyra, and Dawn. It's still really good though.

As for your fics, I must say that thusfar, my favorite fics of yours, from most favorite to least, would probably be: "Rebirth of a Legend", "Legacy of Blood", "Soa's End Game", and "Like Father, Like Son". I don't know why, but I just don't like "Crimson Wings". Can't really explain why.;( Anyways, I truly hope though that you'll soon update one of those top three that I listed.^_^ Great work though. You are definately one of the best authors in the entirety of this site, and I can't wait to see more of the great works done by you.^_^

The Jade Dragon that Lavitz and Albert summoned were not like Feyrbrand at all. It did appear slightly like a but, but also like a machine in a sense as well.

I've been re-readin' your fics Striker, and I still really think that on Rebirth, you should have it be a love triangle between Rayen, Dawn, and Kyra. Maybe Dawn would think of it when she starts to think back to when she first met Rayen, when Phil basically threw her onto him into that suggestive position.^_^

This story is awesome

... *silence* ... I HATE YOU! *clears throat* well not literally... Anyway, I've been looking for a good Legend of Dragoon story and here I've found it. 80 chapters, I had though to myself, this should keep me busy for a while. But I went along and read this anyway. However as I move to the last chapter and the last word I find myself stuck for there is no more to read. Hooked on this story but no more of it to read at the moment, satisfaction slips away. However there may be a way to satisfy it... *steals the Prism Spirit and changes into Apocalypse Dragoon, branishing Azmerak. Goes on rampage. Returns a few hours later, half the world's poputlation destoryed* Okay, better now. But you better hurry up and update 'less you want the other half of the population gone.

Now its my turn to rant... This story is just awesome. I could see the slight change in Rayen from the beginning to the 80th chapter. In the first few chapters of the story Rayen seemed not to have much of a social position, not really liking a crowd, but as the story porgressed he became the leader and general of an army. I could still see the discomfort he still held about crowds but he overcame. Phil is a great character and changes the monotony of all the depression among other things with his quirks. Now Kyra and Shade have to be my two favorite characters. You captured both of their personalities to the greatest extent. *thinks* i believe thats all I wanted to say... Oh, one more thing... UPDATE OR FACE MY WRATH! *holds up Azmerak threateningly*

UPDATE! ...please? with a cherry on top? Ill give u a 10 carnivorous pink bunnies! o_O Just update!

I like, I like a lot! Normaly I don't go for storys that don't contain the origional LoD cast, but you've really pulled it off here, I couldn't stop reading! ...B-but is Oraeus really dead *big kitty eyes* I kinda liked the guy. *perks up* But yes, I very much like this fic, and if you'd like I can send you FanArt on it, I like it that much. Update soon!

Uh... are you EVER goin' to update again? This was an amazing fic, and it'd be sad for you to discontinue it.:( If you're just stuck, maybe you could try re-reading your own fic while imagining and picturing it all in your head. Maybe that would help you get back into your creative streak.^_^