wow...i cant beleive for a one shot how much detail it had in it! the story was short, but still had so much to tell and a stable story plot! it had humor, and suspensful parts . i was shocked at how u made inuyasha react to kagome when she had said wat she did about kikyo. O.O anyways! i loved this story and u should seriously think about writing a full story later if u get the chance

Heh heh heh. I thought it was cute! It wasn't that bad. Maybe you're just being over critical of it? Or I'm being under-critical because I started reading it with the knowledge that you thought it was bad. But I really don't think it's that bad. ^^"

Oh, that was great! I loved it, really good. It seems OOC, but I guees not, since it's so early on in the series. Oh, anyways, I wish my first story had been this good! This was greeat! good job! - Fu fu

A little corny, but so so sweet! I loved reading it. Beautiful Job! *puts on favs*

SQWEE!! Aw...that was so cute! I loved the ending, with Inuyasha curled up at Kag's feet! Very well written for a first story!! Very good solution...Kiss and make up. Who woulda known it could work like that!! A++!

This is an alright fic, especially if you wrote it in highschool. Good use of words and description, something I had trouble grasping at that age.

~QueenTatooine

some of it theroly freaked me out i mean did he use a line from White Chiks! other than that it was a good story glazed with corn

Like so many other people,I didn't think it was corny!I'm really impressed that this was your first fanfic!You are my idol!^^I hope I can write fanfics like you someday!

You think that's bad? Try and see my first fanfic... Let's *not* go there.

Miko-chan

A-w-w-w-w-w-w, that was s-o-o-o-o sweet! I must be bordering on diabetic because I just ate it up! It was just the right "pick-me-up" for the "End-0f-Spring-Break-Blues". I thought it was well written and in character for everyone, considering this was your FIRST?! Well done.!

Corny? Nah. I've done much worse! I really liked the part where he had her pinned on the tree, and being boyfriendless and in my mid-twenties I would have preferred it to run off into NC-17 land but... eh... ;-) Good job!

i duhno, i thought it was cute! *snickers* all you need is a picture of him doing that!

Corny?? I wouldn't go that far...i'd say really sweet and cute!

Made me cry...AGAIN! Grr why dost thou have this power over me!?! GYAH SO FREAKING CUTE!

AW CUTE!