 JoJo 2002-10-07 . chapter 22 This is awsome! I still can't belive that you can write wonderful poetry just like that, I have to wait for my muse to remember that I'm alive, and even then it's not very good peotry. You are truely gifted, I hope you are going to do season 2. ^_~ |
 JoJo 2002-10-06 . chapter 21 That was really terific! I just loved it! You can't even imagine how much I want to see the next one, please post it soon. ^_~ |
 JoJo 2002-10-05 . chapter 20 That was really good. It must have been challenging to write. I know what you mean about the noise, I can never get a moments peace. I love your work, can't wait for the next one. ^_~ |
 JoJo 2002-10-04 . chapter 19 YAY! Your back. That was good. ^_~ |
 Raydyan 2002-09-29 . chapter 14 The ones that are hard to write always turn out better than the rest :) I really liked this one. Quite powerful for most of the verses. :) |
 JoJo 2002-09-27 . chapter 18 Well, I'll be sorry to go a week without any new poetry from you, but the translation of VS3 is a worthy cause. Just try to hurry back, ok. ^_~ |
 JoJo 2002-09-26 . chapter 17 This is really good. But I'm sorry about my review for the last chapter, it was submited before it was ready. What I wanted to say was, that I think that your writing is definitly improving, and I really like your poems. ^_~ |
 JoJo 2002-09-25 . chapter 16 That w |
 JoJo 2002-09-24 . chapter 15 That was good. I really liked it. Also, I've noticed that your chapters are getting longer. ^_~ |
 JoJo 2002-09-23 . chapter 14 This is good. I think you did a great job. Lets have some more soon. ^_~ |
 JoJo 2002-09-22 . chapter 13 Ummm, interesting. ^_~ |
 Alaidh 2002-09-21 . chapter 6 Autopsy??!? |
 JoJo 2002-09-21 . chapter 12 That was good. And if you do happen to find out how to get tapes of both seasons, please share, I missed a lot. Please post the next one ASAP. ^_~ |
 JessicaMackenzie 2002-09-21 . chapter 12Yeap, it's me reviewing my own stuff...how pathetic? Nah!! I'just diddn't feel like writing an author's note inside the story...
Anyways... my bad grammar's because I rely on the crappy Microsoft Word that I HAVE to use...I prefer wordpad...AND English is my second language.
I think that the poems should be shorter, but they ain't... believe me, there are a few that are way too long... like Female Trouble...
I post chapters everyday, and I check reviews everyday, that way I get better, and my ego gets a small boost.
Read my other stories... they're poems too and a what was classified as a Novel before called:
Love Among the Runes, which I had to change because 30 Miles To Bonham wasn't working for it...
Adios guys! |
 b l a c k r o s e 9 2002-09-21 . chapter 12hey this is really good and im not into poetry much! i get what you mean about cheeking everyday to see if you have a review coz i do all the time! Great poems could be a bit longa i guess but i dont really care coz i know how hard it is (for me maybe not you) to write it!!! |