Actually it's Hari Kiri if you're talking about japanese samorai suicides.
This is really good though, please update soon.

I am going to excuse the fact that Canon Character in the Lord of the Rings do not speak English, simply because this story is funny. Yeah, I'm a PPCer, and I'm breaking a major rule by not yelling at you, but this story is just too good to yell at :)

D&D

Excellent! Very funny!

Um, and to whoever that reviewer was who said that losing a backpack in the river is near impossible, it is actually a common survival fact to throw down all items of burden when you accidentally end up in water (i.e. backpacks, jackets, etc.)

Anyway, keep up the good work!

D&D

Awesome! Keep it up and update soon ;D

Hi! I just found this a day or two ago. Been reading since. It's nice. I'm putting on story alert.

WHERE ARE YOU!?!
plz update! this is to good to drop!

u dont know how hysterical this fic is!lmfao *headdesk*

this is really good so far i can't wait to read more!!

Her sarcasms were laughable... I pitied her loss... well, but I don't get the idea still why she can lose her pack - it was connected with her body and not something she carried! She could have lost her camera or perhaps even knife... but her pack? Legolas there looked a bit sinister too... Hee hee. I never thought he could be like that. Emily's stubbornness was useful and in place here, where she ought to learn to survive.

9/10

LOL Finally the story was going somewhere. I had thought it would be only in a circle all around. Hmm. She's a tough girl... and prideful; a trait I didn't guess she possessed. It was kind of startling too when she considered Frodo her friend; I guess the feeling she felt when around him had at last been considered as friendship by her. I wonder what she will get herself into in the next chapter... I hope someday she can go back to her own world. Hee.

10/10

Hmm. I don't expect you to be all Tolkien. *shrug* Just hope that some facts are in there other than the characters. You said that one of them had sandy brown hair, by the way... It's not considered dark, as far as I know. I got a good laugh when Emily realised who she had insulted. I wonder though why Gandalf hadn't let Gimli be known as the son of a lord. Well... speaking of questions... I also wonder who caught Emily at last. LOL

10/10

She is a cheeky one. :) Well... a little too rude, but, as usual, good for a laugh. I bet the hobbit she was talking to in the end was Frodo; how kind he was. LOL Where were they, by the way? It didn't seem that they were moving anywhere... Should the Fellowship not be in a hurry in their journey? It was suggested in LotR. What season was it too? If it was winter like in LotR, then Emily must have very good hide because she didn't freeze yet.

10/10

Hmm. Sometimes she looks like a Merry Sue here... especially about her skill in climbing and stamina, but she was an ordinary girl in other times. What did you base the looks of the characters from? Thee movies? Because all the two men had dark hair... never a sandy brown one. Emily looked panicky here... a bit too much, but laughable. What I considered really a bit much was Gandalf making her pass out.

10/10

Hahaha! I love this! Well, she isn't quite special, but that what makes her special to me. :) I don't often like this sort of fiction, but now I have fallen in love with this one. :P There were some disjointed sentences - not really well-connected from one paragraph/sentence to the other - but I didn't pay attention to it. I love the simple sentences, anyway.

9/10

oh, and i kno i already reviewed in the last chapter but it went on for so long i thought i should break it down into two reviews!! =) i also wanted to say that you captured the moods really well with the songs you put into the story. you used very inspiring songs that really made me cry[when the mood was appropriate of course! i'm not that sentimental!!=)]
anyway, keep updating! (didn't I already say that in the other review?? o.O oh well!