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Goddess Moon 7/27/03 . chapter 1
Hm...you write Inu Yasha too? Interesting concept for a fanfiction, I'll see how it goes. Nice descriptions, by the way.
yasu-yasu 7/26/03 . chapter 8
Beautiful. I, myself, am a Kikyou fan. But I think you managed to appease the Kagome/Inu fans too. _
lynnxlady 7/14/03 . chapter 8
I'm glad you gave Kagome what appears to be Inuyasha's reincarnation. The comment of Inuyasha's, about Kikyo wanting to be near "those brats" was nice, as that seems a big part of Kikyo's personality. Even dead, she likes children. And of course, I adored the I/K fluff. _

Here's a small bit of criticism: the issue with Naraku isn't satisfactorily wrapped up. He seems to be one big plot-thread that is left dangling. Maybe you meant it to be that way, and are intending to write a sequel? Or did you just get tired of the story, and want to end it? If it's the latter, that's okay, I can certainly sympathize. (I'm writing a Sess/Kag that I want to kill, sometimes). But just be aware that the ending is a little lacking and less-than-satisfying (at least to this reader.)

Thank you for your critique of my fic. I think Kikyo has a line in the anime where she says something along the lines of "In this body, I am now free to love, and free to hate as I choose" which indicated to me that she both hated and loved Inuyasha. But I might have to go review that part, thanks to your rather insightful review. _
Priestess Risu89 7/1/03 . chapter 1
OMG I love that ending! so very good. Thank you for the kikyo inuyasa endign,.. people always make kikyo seem so evil, and she is not.,, the hatered in her sould is all she has to live off off.. do all you kikyo haters i cures you! gerr, anyway. HO-gome as some put it (love that) is s stuck up, good for nothing, goody-too-shose, help me inu cause im a woose, sluty, shcool gilr tramp! ! And your details with teh charecters and setting are amazing,. I knwo taht you have gotten alot of reviews, but that is becasue you are sucka demn good write. I love you plot too! o0o0o, i wish you could re0draw the series, it would eb perfect... Why don't you own inu,.. you should,.. can i somehow buy him/the show, for you lol (j/k) anyway! lvoe that soo much please pelase i knwo you get taht alot but please keep in toach with me.. one e-mail please?
oak 5/31/03 . chapter 8
I love all of your storys, but this is my FAVOURITE!

I'm glad you chose the Inuyasha and Kikyou ending. It's the best one i've read.
ReAcH 5/28/03 . chapter 8
*throws confettis around* YEY! Congratulations! that was a great ending! but i was kinda wondering what happened with Naraku? anyway, good job! so... kagome is Kikyo's reincarnate while Hanyoki is Inuyasha's? _ well, that's all! i hope you'll make another Kik/Inu fic in the future! .
anon 5/26/03 . chapter 8
Sango-chan! Wonderful story! I love the end too... I always wanted Kagome to be with Inu's reincarnation. InuYasha in a school uniform -. Wonderful, fantastic, excellent, love it! Inuyasha/Kagome fans that bash Kikyou- Be happy with the ending and don't be mad at Sango-chan! I'm sad that the story ended though... Keep up the good work with other stories! -
kAoMi1 5/26/03 . chapter 8
woah! that was a good story but...WHY WHY WHY DID YOU HAVE TO HAVE KIKYOU AND INUYASHA TOGETHER! YOU COULD HAVE MADE KAGOME BE WITH HIM! WAH well, *ahem* sorry for my whining but I really don't like kikyou and inu together...Good story...
Reviewer 5/25/03 . chapter 8
Woah... The story was a twist... I kind of expected it to be Kag/Inu but Hey! Like you said, it's your story... Why don't you write a sequel to it? I was kind of thinking of using the idea myself, but you're a way better writer...

The idea is that Kagome and Hanyoki go back to the past! You know? Please! Please use the idea and write a sequel! PLEASE! I BEG! And I NEVER EVER beg...
hi 5/25/03 . chapter 8
Ohh! the ending was wonderful! i'm sure it kept everyone happy. normally i'm a Kag/Inuyasha fan but this Kik/Inu fuc was great. GREAT JOB!
tsunami-chan 5/25/03 . chapter 8
Now that is the way the story should end.

Awesome story!
Aiko19th 5/25/03 . chapter 8
Hum... the Inu/Kik part was fine, very good/cute!

But the part of Kagome/Okuda... kind of strange... this Okuda look like Hojo? yucky... XP Asking Kagome-chan to go to the movies... riding on a bike... XD

It is not that I didn't like it... but.. kind of weird.. but cute! ;
Aiko19th 5/24/03 . chapter 7
Whoow.. How cute... -

yet.. I was thinking that Kikyo, when she woke up, would catch her bow and arrows.. and try to kill Inu-chan... XD

ARGH! How can Naraku be alive after the Kaze no Kizu! Come on! That Naraku was a weak hanyou! "Now" he is a powerful one! ;;

Ano.. Whe does Inu-chan has Tetsusaiga? Shouldn't it be with Inu's dad's bones? [XD] I mean... he is in the past! He shouldn't have the sword... I think.. ;
Aiko19th 5/24/03 . chapter 6
Kikyo? yay! \o/

I thought you would choose Kagome! ; ['cos everyone wants her...]

But I like Kikyo-sama! _ [yet.. I like Kag/Inu pair.. ;]

Uhum.. I knew that "sugoi" means horrible and terrifying[and to a great extent].. but.. I think that authors use it as "wonderful/amazing".. I mean it is most of the times used like this.. gah.. sorry my english is horrible.. I can't explain it.. XD
Chibi Shi-chan1 5/24/03 . chapter 8
That was a great ending to the fic... I have to say well done... a little bit for everyone... I have to say I'm an Inu/Kag fan but that Inu/Kik ending was very well done.

Bravo!
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