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Choas Babe
2007-07-18 . chapter 16
I love cats. Well, that takes Mikey out of Leo/Cabbage. I love Raph/Sterling. Hmm, Pipes/Mikey, she needs someone who can make her laugh, Shima/Donnie. Obviously April/Casey.
Chaotic Jinx
2007-04-14 . chapter 16
I got 2 words for you chika:

up

Date

NOW!

Wait no, thats 3 words, **.

Well watever. Up date, or hurry up with the promissed 're-write' of these stories! thanx.

Cos these are the best turtle fics i've found thus far!

Catch'cha on da flip side!

~*C.J*~
thechickenlittle
2006-02-11 . chapter 16
wow!! incredible story!! i love it! you have to write more as soon as you can!

please?!
greshunkai
2006-01-10 . chapter 16
just reread all of both of these stories-marveled at the perfection of how you have pinned to the wall the relationship between R. & CJ -not just with a description, but actual dialog and actions--when CJ shows up in A.'s place to take them back to city. understanding much clearer when reread two or three times--belt-fed weapon T-shirt was a masterful touch. thanks again & i'll be hoping you'll see your way to finishing.
greshunkai
2006-01-08 . chapter 1
can anything persuade you to complete this story?it is the best conception and execution of the "seven brides for seven brothers"(make that 'four')theme that i have ever read. your characterizations and word choice are both dead on. Hanami & this sequel both hold elements that make the disbelief suspension (a la a sci-fi) incredibly easy. thank you very much for this most enjoyable composition.
Reinbeauchaser
2005-08-21 . chapter 16
Okay, this is definitely NOT done!

Yippee!!

Then again, it was a long time ago and far, far way from the last time you updated. Me thinks you ran out of creative juices for this one.

Well, now that you've had oodles of time to rest up and all of that, I hope you feel the nudge to contiue this.

If now, well, I'm still waiting for your parody of Mary Sue to update. With that, at least, I'll find some measure of happiness.

Loved this story - alot. Hope your muses start feeding you more chapters for it, too.

Be blessed.
Reinbeauchaser
2005-08-21 . chapter 15
Yeah, well, now they're sisters. Given time, I think they're gonna be something else entirely.

Great chapter. Loved it.

Now, on to the last one.

Last one? Wait! There , there has to be more chapters. At least another sequel? Goodness, you've crafted some very interesting OC's here, that beg for more stories.

Ah, shoot. It looks as if this is the end, after all.

Bummer, but what a ride, none the less.

Be blessed.
Reinbeauchaser
2005-08-21 . chapter 14
The wonderful thing about writing and leaving your musings on Fan Ficiton, is that new readers are always stopping by. Sorry to see that when you initially updated this story with chapter 14, chapter 13 didn't get any reviews. It was really a cute chapter, too. Well, I guess with my review for thirteen, that zero is now a one.

Anyway, I have to babysit my daughter while she house sits for a member of our church. She doesn't like being alone and I guess all of her friends were busy. So, she asked me to stay the night with her. As soon as I'm done here, I'm off.

This was a cute chapter. I don't know what Shima told Don, but - goodness, he sounded embarrased! Tee hee.

Love the walk to the lair. Mike with two? Wow, didn't know he was that strong.

Poor Raphers, though. Pity the dude the next morning.

Great job!

Be blessed.
Reinbeauchaser
2005-08-21 . chapter 13
Yes, I've been there, been so tired I would laugh at wallpaper.

This was just as good as the others.

That means cloy words are no longer necessary.

You know I like it, so what else is there to say?

Thought so.

Be blessed.
Reinbeauchaser
2005-08-21 . chapter 12
Bunny Boy! Bwahaha

Very good chapter, yet again.

Be blessed,
Rene'
Reinbeauchaser
2005-08-21 . chapter 11
Ah, this was cute. Loved the snuggle time under the blankets, even though everyone was uncomfortable.

Cute chappy.

Be blessed.
Reinbeauchaser
2005-08-21 . chapter 10
Oh, my that was hil - ah - very, very funny.

Drat the cloyness of some words.

Anyway, goodness me, I have to admit, it took a few lines after that classic one about assassins before I understood. Then, I was wishing it was Monday morning, my husband was at work, so I can laugh out loud. Alas, it's Sunday morning, twelve thirty-eight a.m., and my husband is in bed.

I think I made my hernia worse.

Oh well, it was worth it, especially Splinter's last line! LOL

Be blessed.
Reinbeauchaser
2005-08-21 . chapter 9
This was hilarious, again. Yeah, even that word is becoming cloy. GAH.

Well, love Mike trying to spy - and failing.

Loved the noogie scene, Raph wanting to pound Mike, and then Leo getting his youngest brother in a headlock.

Oh, and then Pipes analysing Cabbage and comparing herself to her sister.

But, then, Raph being voted most cute.

Priceless.

But, I'm sure he enjoyed it; despite his rash response.

Great job.

And as far as your other story updating late in the evening, considering how entertaining it is, I won't complain anymore. I'll just have to put up with my hernia, is all. LOL

Be blessed.

Be blessed.
Reinbeauchaser
2005-08-19 . chapter 7
Oh, the backgrouind flashbacky thing was very informative. You wrote it very well and - ah - very knowingly. Methinks you either did a mondo job of researching this part or had some personal experiences, although certainly not with the mutagen thingy.

Just realized that your pen name means 'cabbage'. And, you have an OC in this with the same moniker. Very cute. However, I don't have a clue what Kya would mean.

Back to reviewing.,.

Leo's massage was hilarious. His resistance, anxiety, and then eventual submission was very funny. Raph's remark even more so!

Anyway, onward and forward. As you've noticed, I didn't get this puppy read entirely yesterday. No promises about having it done today, either.

Once September rolls around and my daughter goes back to college, I'll have more time to read. I have to admit, though, I love her interruptions. She's a very outgoing funny girl and quite entertaining. Best buds, we are!

Be blessed.
Reinbeauchaser
2005-08-19 . chapter 6
I read this yesterday, forgot to review, since finishing this fic was my main goal. Didn't happen, though. My eyes gave out. That's what happens when one sits 10 hours in front of a monitor screen.

JK

Anyway, poor Sterling, stuck between her attitude and her heart. Poor Raph, just stuck with an attitude! LOL

Loved the thumb war battle, it was great. Poor Mike, so confident and yet, so beaten.

Now, to review the next chapter!

Onward and forward!

Be blessed.
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