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Sasami1
4/5/11 . chapter 14
Hey Kyabetsu,

Just going through some of my favorite stories, and of course this series is on here. I know it's been almost 10 years, but that sounds like just the right amount of time for a glorious return to tales left untold.

Hoping to hear from you,

Sasami
Scribe of Turesa
4/5/10 . chapter 16
Update this soon! I like it. Funny and engaging.

-Lon
Scribe of Turesa
4/5/10 . chapter 14
Oh boy...the poor girls are freaked out aren't they? What exactly did happen with Don?

-Lon
Scribe of Turesa
4/5/10 . chapter 5
"Falls to floor laughing hysterically" My sister is looking at me like I'm nuts right now...little blue fairy..."continues laughing"

-Lon
Choas Babe
7/18/07 . chapter 16
I love cats. Well, that takes Mikey out of Leo/Cabbage. I love Raph/Sterling. Hmm, Pipes/Mikey, she needs someone who can make her laugh, Shima/Donnie. Obviously April/Casey.
Chaotic Jinx
4/14/07 . chapter 16
I got 2 words for you chika:

up

Date

NOW!

Wait no, thats 3 words, fuck.

Well watever. Up date, or hurry up with the promissed 're-write' of these stories! thanx.

Cos these are the best turtle fics i've found thus far!

Catch'cha on da flip side!

~*C.J*~
thechickenlittle
2/11/06 . chapter 16
wow! incredible story! i love it! you have to write more as soon as you can!

please?
greshunkai
1/10/06 . chapter 16
just reread all of both of these stories-marveled at the perfection of how you have pinned to the wall the relationship between R. & CJ -not just with a description, but actual dialog and actions-when CJ shows up in A.'s place to take them back to city. understanding much clearer when reread two or three times-belt-fed weapon T-shirt was a masterful touch. thanks again & i'll be hoping you'll see your way to finishing.
greshunkai
1/8/06 . chapter 1
can anything persuade you to complete this story?it is the best conception and execution of the "seven brides for seven brothers"(make that 'four')theme that i have ever read. your characterizations and word choice are both dead on. Hanami & this sequel both hold elements that make the disbelief suspension (a la a sci-fi) incredibly easy. thank you very much for this most enjoyable composition.
Reinbeauchaser
8/21/05 . chapter 16
Okay, this is definitely NOT done!

Yippee!

Then again, it was a long time ago and far, far way from the last time you updated. Me thinks you ran out of creative juices for this one.

Well, now that you've had oodles of time to rest up and all of that, I hope you feel the nudge to contiue this.

If now, well, I'm still waiting for your parody of Mary Sue to update. With that, at least, I'll find some measure of happiness.

Loved this story - alot. Hope your muses start feeding you more chapters for it, too.

Be blessed.
Reinbeauchaser
8/21/05 . chapter 15
Yeah, well, now they're sisters. Given time, I think they're gonna be something else entirely.

Great chapter. Loved it.

Now, on to the last one.

Last one? Wait! There , there has to be more chapters. At least another sequel? Goodness, you've crafted some very interesting OC's here, that beg for more stories.

Ah, shoot. It looks as if this is the end, after all.

Bummer, but what a ride, none the less.

Be blessed.
Reinbeauchaser
8/21/05 . chapter 14
The wonderful thing about writing and leaving your musings on Fan Ficiton, is that new readers are always stopping by. Sorry to see that when you initially updated this story with chapter 14, chapter 13 didn't get any reviews. It was really a cute chapter, too. Well, I guess with my review for thirteen, that zero is now a one.

Anyway, I have to babysit my daughter while she house sits for a member of our church. She doesn't like being alone and I guess all of her friends were busy. So, she asked me to stay the night with her. As soon as I'm done here, I'm off.

This was a cute chapter. I don't know what Shima told Don, but - goodness, he sounded embarrased! Tee hee.

Love the walk to the lair. Mike with two? Wow, didn't know he was that strong.

Poor Raphers, though. Pity the dude the next morning.

Great job!

Be blessed.
Reinbeauchaser
8/21/05 . chapter 13
Yes, I've been there, been so tired I would laugh at wallpaper.

This was just as good as the others.

That means cloy words are no longer necessary.

You know I like it, so what else is there to say?

Thought so.

Be blessed.
Reinbeauchaser
8/21/05 . chapter 12
Bunny Boy! Bwahaha

Very good chapter, yet again.

Be blessed,

Rene'
Reinbeauchaser
8/21/05 . chapter 11
Ah, this was cute. Loved the snuggle time under the blankets, even though everyone was uncomfortable.

Cute chappy.

Be blessed.
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