Pretty good, although in the beginning I was a bit confused :)

So... What's this about it being discontinued? And WHY?!

Hello wonderful author! :)

This is just to let you know that your story is listed in my website "Potions and Snitches", a fanfiction site dedicated to the mentor relationships between Harry Potter and Severus Snape. Please let me know if you want me to take it down, update your info, talk about chocolate frogs, or have any questions. A link to the website is in my profile.

Thank you for your story! :) It doesn't have a frog rating yet but it's on the list.

Jan

why did u stop updating?

cool. I haven't finished it yet but i will soon. its good.

Your stroy is different...i liked it...update soon i want to know what will hapen between draco and the trio...i can hardly wait!

Hay, i realli like this story it's very...interesting, different.
anyway i hope you update soon, i want more
Oh, I've also put you in my Favorite stories list
Looking forward to your Severus/Hermione story
jordanz

i'm sorry, but your story makes no sense what so ever. i think you have too many loose ends. there is too many gaps in the story. first it is before term starts, and then holidays are called short, and then harry gets sick, but somewhere in the middle of that they have extra defense lessons? u need to slow down and make the timeline clearer.

Hey I love the fic. I know you like ppl being honest, and I am. Its very well written, and very descriptive. WELL DONE

hey!keep up the great work.

Yeah! good chapter, good chapter

Update soon

HermioneGreen

Looking forward to more. :)

Lauren

Hello, I was wondering if you would like to join a wonderful Harry Potter Message Board Roleplaying site I know of. It is called the Durmstrung Insitute; there students roleplay as though they attend the magical school of Durmstrung. Classes are held, Quidditch is played, and adventures are had. Dedicated writers are welcomed happily, and Durmstrung is accepting applications right now.

The address to the site is:

http://w.geocities.com/ivan_karovsky/durmstrang.html

The address to the Formal Chamber is:

http://disc.server.com/Indices/208576.html

I do hope you'll come join the fun.

Sincerily,

~A Dedicated Member~

Will Harry talk with Hedwig about Snape being okay? Will Sirius and Snape be back at Hogwarts?

And so things become very awkward.