This is one of the best alternate beginning stories I have read. Once I started I couldn't put it down. Excellent work.

This story has got to be the MOST underappreciated

piece of Clois fanfiction I have EVER come across.

And that is saying something. From your characterisation

of "Charlie", being an innately decent person, and Lois, trying

to work out who and what he is (The angel theory was particularly

hilarious for me). It took 4hrs of non-stop reading to get

through this titan, and I have to admit it was worth every little moment. People just don't write fanfiction this good anymore. )

I really enjoyed this fic. It was really sweet. I liked how it shows how things cold have been. But who is that doctor?

It is a very interesting and amazing story ! Wonderful ! I love it ! So I read the next stories about Clark and Lois you wrote ! You are an Excellent writer, the best I have ever read ! (Sorry for my English, I am french)

Fan of Lois and Clark forever !

BRAVO! I love this remake.

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oh great story!

you have some great lois and clark stories here.

good work!

What a great story! The best I've read so far! Keep it up, can't wait to read more of your stories!

Great story, Nan! I've got to admit you some of the best Lois & Clark stories I've read. Keep up the good work!