Ha, I love it! ^_^ You know, the moment I have found your story is actually Christmas, so don´t worry, your story was read on Christmas and I can just repeat: I LOVE IT!
HAPPY CHRISTMAS for you!
Your Melfdragon

This is really sweet!

really sweet! and i laughed my ** off at poppy's orders! she was bloody fantastic!

I loved this story you created. It was very good Artemis-41. I loved the main slash pairing of Harry/Severus. The other pairings were wonderful of Hermione/Ron, Sirius/Remus, and Percy/Oliver. The babies were named nicely and sounded so cute! Great story you made, it’s going on my favorites list.

I liked this the first time I read this and it is still funny and fluffy. Thanks for sharing.

Cute story! I love that you made Lily the trickster!
~Lightningbook

Naww this story not sappy. It's very funny and lovable. I love harry/sevvie pairings. keep up the good work. Hey, I sound like my teacher, freaky. ^__^

Um... Well I like the idea, but I dare say it sounds horribly familiar. I'm not accusing you of stealing or anything, don't worry. Anyway. I think you should have described Harry's pregnancy better, such as how he became pregnant and the birth. I mean, he's a guy. It would be more believable if some sort of spell was mentioned or something about Harry inheriting the ability to become pregnant naturally. Other than that, you're good. That's all I have to say.

-Raven

Brilliant, Just brilliant. I love the idea of twins. COOL

aw! how sweet is that. babies are so cute. are you a guy or a girl, cuz if you're a guy, talking about babies like that, lotz of girls would go for you. if youre not, then i applaud you on your wonderful writing skills. i love it

mrslijwood

Lovely dearie

"Another contraction as the being of the birth of the next child."
BEST SENTENCE EVER.

How come everything is capitalised and everyone is married?

Wow! Do a sequel PLEASE! This time Sev can be preggers...

I'm gonna give a bit of tough love right now. In my opinion, the reason why a few people who reiewed this story really don't care for it, is because you really didn't offer up any explanation about the pregnacy...if it was female, than no explanation would be necessary...however, this isn't a female. You really need to find a reason for this to happen; some special spell, some potion, or maybe a curse. Other than that, and a real short, non-descriptive birth scene, this story could use a pretty good overhaul. ::Hugs:: You can do it!

Oh dear god!!
What the hell have you done to Snape *cries*?!He's a PEDOPHILE?!WTF WTF WTF!
There aren't enough WFTs in the universe.
Be ashamed, be VERY ashamed.