Absolutely amazing, riveting and delightful. Extremely sad ending, but at the same time if it had been any other way then the story would not have been as good. This fic has greatly enticed me and I have thought a lot on the topic. Congratulations, you have done very very well.

Excellent Chapter, I regretfully can't finish this now (as I'm in school) but I'll read this when I'm at home!

It took me almost a week to recover from this. It is an amazing story and i really think you should have a part two. How could you let brennan die. i expected everything but that. And what happened with emma being injected does she have elemental powers now? Please help me out

Wow. This story is just...wow. It's great. This story helped me through a really rough period in my life, and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for writing it.

I'd really love it if you could do a sequel, because you write so well and there is so much meaning in your words. More Brennan would be good...I understand he's dead, but if there is a way you could bring him back, could you, please?

Thanks again for the story...you'll never know how much it has helped me.

ShaedowCat

I really loved your story, you are an awesome writer. But i dont like that you killed Brennen. And besides the stoery is called part one!! Is there a second part to the story? I think you should bring Brennen back to life, you could say the morphine Adam gave him had an effect with virus and the messiah strand and he came back to life or something. Yeah but anyways awesome story!

~Cassidy

See her cry! You made me cry, the ending was really good, I thought he might get through it but I guess that you had other plans!

That was just evil! I honestly started to cry when i realised Brennan finally died. But then thinking it was better that way. There is no way i could´ve handle a new back-from-the-dead thing and happy-ever-after. I think i hate this story, but still thank you for writing it.

This is the most touching story I think I've ever read. Emma and Brennan belong together, but I'm kinda glad it didn't end happily ever after as it would cheapen such a great story. I love this story and am looking forward to reading your next piece.

I can't believe you killed Brennan!! AH! lol...still you're a really good writer...BUT YOU KILLED BRENNAN! jk!

this is probably the fifth time i've read this story and it still makes me cry. i too just gave up on mx but i always came back to this story because i loved the way you showed the characters. i truly wish that you had continued this story or at least posted the rest of what you had written but i can understand that you losing interest or inspiration in the show, especially after emma was killed off. Anyway it was a truly great story, and i'm truly greatful that you gave us readers the ending we needed.

I've just found your story a couple of days ago and have finally finished reading all of it. And its amazing, the down sider theres going to be no sequel, which this story needs :)

Boy...Long story! Took me 3 working days to finish this story...Luckily I work sitting at a computer with nothing to do for 20 hours a week!
Really, this was a well done story. I know you probably wrote it a long time ago, and I'm so unbelievably glad I didn't have to endure the waiting between chapters. I'm so proud that you could finish a story so long in chapters without quitting, or even worse, letting the story go to crap (like me with my story). Congrats on staying away from the luring reviews to switch your story to slash or some such nonsense. You did great. I'm glad I had the opportunity to finish your story.
Thank you

Bloody hell girl! You have written an awsome story the only downer was the end of Brennan. My regret was that A, I only just found it.B, that it is 1.30am my time and I have to be ready to go to work in 3 hours, and finally C that my B*computer kept crashing whilst I tried to read it. If your work ever hits paperback please let me know so that I can read it at leasure without worrying about work. Please excuse my poor spelling but it's late what can I say.
To put things in a nut shell well done continue the good work, don't take it all out on Brennan and I look forward to reading more of your work. If your ever in the UK I look forward to a book signing.
Yours
Nikki Chan

Hi. I just read the first chapter of your fic Unwanted Desires, and would like to read the rest. Could you send me the url please, as i have no idea what those abbrieviations mean. Thanks.

Didn't I tell you you'll reach 500 in no time? Enjoy this moment, you deserve it.
So this review is because you made me cry three times until now. Maybe the fourth will come with 'N&M'(the fact that it didn't happen for now doesn't mean that it won't). *winks at you*
Thank you for all you've done.