That was GREAT! I'm amazed at how well you wrote Murdock first person. I imagine that was difficult, since he's so random. And yet he was perfectly in character. His discriptions of his friends and this unusual experience...well I can just hear him talking. Very entertaining, perfectly in character with everyone. Loved the ending too!

great story

I heard once that the greatest compliment a writer can recieve is to write a story that the reader will want to read over again.

I've read this four times now!

Great story, wonderful visuals (I can just picture those 'old clouds'), the conversations and reactions were natural and true to the characters. I love the line of Hannibal's - '"My first time," he said calmly.'

And even though this review is long past when you wrote this, and you have probably gone on to better and bigger things, I still want to thank you for a very enjoyable story.

Yours, Liestra

A most unusual story, with a most unusual POV, and I loved every minute! Kudos to you! :)

Excellent! Just like Murdock. Capturing all his craziness to it's most wonderful extent!

Great! I love the Murdock POV - don't see as much of it as I'd like to. Also, the mental picture I got of Hannibal's cigar floating in midair wwas great! Nice descriptions, and you've got a good bead on the way Murdock talks and thinks ( Describing Hannibal as the "great enchilada" was a perfect touch!) keep up the good work!

That was awesome! That was totally original! I've never heard of anthing like that happening in the Bermuda Triangle. That was creepy. *shivers* It's like, gravity was turned off for a second and they were in some kind of bubble. Cool! This is possibly the best A-Team fic I've ever read! Loved it!

This was great! Poor Murdock. One of these days the team will actually believe him. I love some of those descriptions you use - clouds that hadn't been dusted, mired in air - great. Hope there's more soon.

Dodeedodee dodeedodee! Okay, so I liked it, I liked it!

That was awesome, and from Murdock's pov. How cool!

vedddy interesting

That was such a good story! I love that you did it from Murdock's POV and that he wasn't totally tripping! Face crossing himself at that one point was very interesting...and the ending! Oh, poor Murdock! Great job! : )

OMG This RULES! I have to give you ***** on this one! Wow!