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Velvet Nights
2007-11-02 . chapter 3
malboro, best known from final fantasy 3, 7, 8, 10, and X-2.

and locke was the thief in final fantasy 5 i believe it was, better known as final fantasy 3.

yay ryoko ^_^
Tetsu Deinonychus
2007-08-18 . chapter 3
This was wonderful! Of course, I'm a big fan of "shock collar" stories in general.

I liked the part where Ayeka was reciting random sexual terms just to shock Ryoko, and how Nobuyuki ended up wearing it at the end (after all, He's at least as bad as Ryoko).

I also REALLY like the way you depict Yosho/Katsuhito. He's truly the head of the family!

If possible, I'd like to read the original cut of this.
Galaxy1001D
2007-06-14 . chapter 3
This story easily marks you as the best fanfic writer in the Tenchi Muyo genre. I doubt that Hitoshi Okuda could do any better. This hilarious story is faithful to the manga and the OAV series that inspired it. This story managed to be both funny and touching at the same time. It has inspired me to try my hand at a Tenchi Muyo story. Keep up the good work!
ShadowKira
2007-02-20 . chapter 1
This was awesome. I had planned writing something semi similar but it didn't involve the shock collar and thus would not have been near as funny, but even though this story was funny it had some cute parts too ^.^ Great job! Mind if I do some fanart for it?
Giggles
2006-09-28 . chapter 3
This was a well written story! Of course I am writing this a few DAYS after reading that, who wouldn't? Tears of laughter have dotted my keyboard since I began reading this story. Every character seemed in their place and mood. All I can do is agree with everyone else...might we have a bit more, please? May all your writings stay lengthy and bring joy, sorrow, and anything else you want to express, to your readers! Good Luck and I hope to read more!
Schwarzwind
2006-08-05 . chapter 2
hey good story
hope to read more!!
Elfish Etyma
2006-04-25 . chapter 3
This was a sweet piece of work, and I liked how it focused more on Ryoko than Ayeka, because those type of stories are hard to find and she happens to be my favourite character. It flowed wonderfully, and I found that you managed to keep everyone in perfect character - something else that's hard to find on this site. Overall, I found "No Need for Discipline!" to be an excellent work of prose, but still given this fact, I found there to be a few grammatical errors dotted about the chapters. However, it didn't distract me too much from the rich plot and wonderful play on words that you created.

Thank you for a more than decent read.
Asanohoshi
2005-09-14 . chapter 2
very good! I'm loving it so far...
KUMidshipman2011
2003-08-04 . chapter 3
FUNNY AS HELL!
HAHAHAHAHA!
Ersatz.Love
2003-07-29 . chapter 3
Yay! That was a really funny fic X3 I loved the ending! That was really witty ^^; this just cracks me up. Good job, yo!
LadySilverDragon2
2003-06-27 . chapter 3
great
Nyx
2003-05-11 . chapter 3
*raises from Hell* muahahahahahahahahaha! Im BACK! lol, yes, after a millenia of working non-stop on my own pathetic works of literature I felt the need to come back to my most favorite ffnet author! anywhoo, I really loved the final chapter of this story, the ending, was excellent! it was funny and tied up all the ends in a very amusing way. Ryoko learns a lesson without sacrificing her personality, not many can do that very well ^_^. Damnit, I wish they could have kissed though, but I think that might have taken away from the theme of the story anyhow *sigh*. but, yeah, thanks so much for a good read Mr. Snoogie (even if It DID take me forever and a half!)I'll still be loitering around all your stories for a very long time so never think for a second im just gunna go away, *evil laugh* hehehe...
-Nyx
J.L. Dexter
2003-04-21 . chapter 3
(is still laughing- well, I am sure you guessed the rest... and who said anything about a review? I plead the fifth!)

(gets herself under control) Ok.. ok... I promised a review, lest be one good word... so here it is... Ha!

Ok, I did my part to save the author's self-esteem, now write more! (gives Bambi eyes) Please...? I'm sure Ryoko will give you a cookie. ^^;;

Great story... and I am not even going to bother on commenting on Ayeka's 'PMS" cause according to your review board, it seems, you've paid your fees for mentioning that one.

Hope you come out with something new soon (note: I already read No Need For Camping, now come out with something even more 'new!')

--Me
J.L. Dexter
2003-04-21 . chapter 2
(is 'still' laughing too hard to review at this time, but rest assured... there will be a review.)
J.L. Dexter
2003-04-21 . chapter 1
(is laughing so hard to review at the moment, but don't worry... she 'will' review.)
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