Blah! Ignore those two! They know nothing of lyrics. Lyrics are basically poetry and it doesn't have to rhyme or anything if ya don't wish. I see what ya did with the theme song. Ya wanted to combine all the theme songs together with his and that's cool. As for your other songs, I can see some music going on with them. Don't get all down 'cause they said that 'cause they're beyond wrong, dude. Well, I've gotta catch up with your stories. I haven't been reading much fanfiction lately. Been real busy so I shall now go to enjoy more of it though I wish you'd write more lyrics. Up to you though.

May I point out the fact that this "THEME SONG" is merely comprised of other songs from Sonic Adventure 2.

Even taking your dyslexia into account, this still isn't very good. First of all, these aren't songs except in a metaphorical sense, as they have no music. They also have no rhythm, so I can't really imagine setting them to music. Secondly, it seems like rather bad poetry and does not make sense very much. You should probably consider getting a beta reader. Finally, there's no real explanation of who the POV character is--maybe you should have something pointing to what stories they're in--and very little Sonic in it.

1 out of 10

Nice.... CONTINUE!!!!

very eccentric and creepy

OH YEAH!!!! CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!

It's getting better... ^_^

CONTINUE!!!!!!!! DON'T STOP NOW!!!!! I DON'T CARE IF PEOPLE HAVE NO SENSE OF MUSIC AND I'M THE ONLY FAN SO FAR!!!! DON'T LEAT THIS DIE! IT'S TOO GOOD!!!!

Wow! These are really kick-**! You'll have to help me write a theme for Flilora, my character! Very good indeed