Reviews for Matrix the hedgehog: Songs

Reviews For: Matrix the hedgehog: Songs

Jodie Takira 2004-03-21 ch 6,	abuseBlah! Ignore those two! They know nothing of lyrics. Lyrics are basically poetry and it doesn't have to rhyme or anything if ya don't wish. I see what ya did with the theme song. Ya wanted to combine all the theme songs together with his and that's cool. As for your other songs, I can see some music going on with them. Don't get all down 'cause they said that 'cause they're beyond wrong, dude. Well, I've gotta catch up with your stories. I haven't been reading much fanfiction lately. Been real busy so I shall now go to enjoy more of it though I wish you'd write more lyrics. Up to you though.
Eggsleezbum 2003-06-01 ch 6, anon.	abuseMay I point out the fact that this "THEME SONG" is merely comprised of other songs from Sonic Adventure 2.
KnightRandom 2003-05-07 ch 1,	abuseEven taking your dyslexia into account, this still isn't very good. First of all, these aren't songs except in a metaphorical sense, as they have no music. They also have no rhythm, so I can't really imagine setting them to music. Secondly, it seems like rather bad poetry and does not make sense very much. You should probably consider getting a beta reader. Finally, there's no real explanation of who the POV character is--maybe you should have something pointing to what stories they're in--and very little Sonic in it. 1 out of 10
Ibuki 2002-11-24 ch 9, anon.	abuseNice.... CONTINUE!!!!
Hypa-KS 2002-11-23 ch 9, anon.	abusevery eccentric and creepy
Ibuki 2002-11-10 ch 8, anon.	abuseOH YEAH!!!! CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jodie Takira 2002-10-28 ch 7,	abuseIt's getting better... ^_^
Jodie Takira 2002-10-21 ch 5,	abuseCONTINUE!!!!!!!! DON'T STOP NOW!!!!! I DON'T CARE IF PEOPLE HAVE NO SENSE OF MUSIC AND I'M THE ONLY FAN SO FAR!!!! DON'T LEAT THIS DIE! IT'S TOO GOOD!!!!
Jodie Takira 2002-09-13 ch 2,	abuseWow! These are really kick-**! You'll have to help me write a theme for Flilora, my character! Very good indeed

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