This is so SAD...but I still love it. Probably because Selena and Little-Helena are written so nicely!
The part with Helena climbing on top of everything in the apartment Barbara freaking out reminds me of how my sister and I were when we were small.
"MI HIJAS, I want you to get down from there VERY CAREFULLY..."
"But MOOOM..."
"RIGHT NOW."

Triste,muy triste, porque tantas mentiras?.

nice one shot. poor bruce.

This story is incredible. I really wish you would continue with this series. It makes a great story line.

Nice story. Very well written.

Hey I love both of ur B OF Prey stories..keep it up.

Very cool fic. I really liked it. Thanks.

Oh gosh, did I say descripting? It's amazing what sugar can do to me. I meant describing. Sorry. Just had to correct myself _

I could almost picture everything in my head. Again, very well written. I think Selena was right in not telling Bruce. All for the safety of Helena. But it does make you feel guilty thinking about it. He does have a right to know. Maybe for your next fic you could have Bruce find out. You're very good with emotions and descripting. It would be interesting to see. Keep up the good work.

Again, a very good story... you've put in a good prequel to the actual series. I could just see Helena being so rebellious as a child! Good job!

She have have told him, but you're right to. Telling him would put Helena in danger.

That was good. PLease update soon. :):):)

I was a little confused at the begining because I'm not really familiar with the fandom but this is a wonderful fic. You know the story very well, I can't wait to see where you take this.