great story

Very lovely - a nice development of plot, and fleshing out of the characters. I recently rekindled my interest in Jem and the Holograms, and this has been a most enjoyable read. Thanks! :)

I really wish that jem and the holograms would make more episodes! A really beautiful story that I will cherish for a long time!

That was one, to borrow a phrase from the JEM series, 'Truely Outrageous' I hope that you will come up with more outstanding hits such as the one I just finished reading.

What a crescendo with which to end your tale! It seems everyone has a "happy ending" this time--The Stingers, The Misfits, and Jem/Jerrica and the Holograms all have found their respective spaces, and seem more than content with the open possibilities of life. But what's next? Hopefully your vision of the Jem universe will not end here; you have left many readers, I'm sure, clamoring for more of your insightful pen.

And, something of an afterthought, I want to express my appreciation for the warnings that heralded the content of the more "adult" chapters of this novel. Such sensitivity is greatly appreciated in an open forum like this, where any wandering young and/or conservative eyes can stumble even accidentally upon more mature material. Yet such consideration is greatly lacking regarding the majority of tales that demand it, so discovering your apt A/N at the beginning of those chapters was a welcome surprise. Thank you.

A masterpiece. This is how the serious should have ended. I loved every chapter of it. Thank you, Aja, and I hope dearly that you write more.

Now that's genius! To have Riot use Pizzazz to take over Stingers Sound. God your good!

sarah

Have been following this story arc for a few weeks now, reading bits and chapters whenever I have the chance. A complex take on the characters of the "Jem" series, very explorative in examining more fully their respective relationships and personal motivations. It will be very interesting to see how this drama turns out in the end--I've always kind of wondered where the show would have wandered had it not been canceled; "Our Time" is certainly a possibility conceived for a deeper, more adult audience.

Thank goodness things turned out so well, I hope to hear more from you. Please check out my Knight Rider/JEM combination Mysteries of the Knight. I hope you find it as good a read as I do yours.

I actually had tears in my eyes. The scene where Jerrica calls the press conference...Pizzazz's breakdown and being cared for by her band...Brava! If this isn't already on my favorite story list, it's going there now!

The suspense is killing me and I can't wait to read more

I'm really liking all the drama; looking forward to more--the archduke

Okay the story adds alot of suspense and I would love to read how it turns out? Keep me posted please.

Oh. Wow.

My god, that was wonderful. I love how you revealed Jerrica's deception. And the way that Rio reacted, spot-on! I like how all of the mid-circle of friends (Danse, Video, Anthony) slowly but surely discover Jem's secret. ^_^ What happens next?

*Great* Misfits interaction at the start of this chapter. Totally in character. I look forward to seeing what happens now with Rio and J/J. What will life be like now that the mystery is out?