|Reviews for What Would You See?|
| riverrat 8/14/12 . chapter 11
This story was my favorite of them all. You showed the emotional state of Theodore very well. One can see why he would feel betrayed and basically gave up on what he wanted and "surrendered to the dark", as you said it so well in your last sentence.
| riverrat 8/14/12 . chapter 10
Bella finally got what she wanted all this time - or so she thinks. Pretty sneaky;-)
| riverrat 8/14/12 . chapter 9
Poor Neville. A sad but wonderful story.
| riverrat 8/14/12 . chapter 5
Of course Lockhart didn't get the hints Severus was giving him. No surprise there...lol
| riverrat 8/14/12 . chapter 1
It was nice how the mirror gave Severus a boost into the right direction.
| writer's legend 4/20/12 . chapter 11
| musiclover 9/22/06 . chapter 11
Hey I check this fic for updates but i still haven't seen one.
:[. PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
| musiclover 8/14/06 . chapter 11
I loved all of the chapters!
I want to rant and rave about them all! But that would be a way to long review so i'll settle for tellin you i loved it all! :]!
| musiclover 8/14/06 . chapter 5
"How about," he replied after an extremely awkward pause, " I shove your offer up your arse and shrivel your overly large head to reveal the empty, brainless, fluff-filled crevice that it really is - then display it on a spike above the entrance hall for all to see and be thankful for – thereby ridding the public of yet another incompetent, irritating, menace to society?"
Loved that whole paragraph! Snape has such a way with words :].
“Oh, Severus! Cream really is my colour!” he shrieked with delight.
“Right there before you, is your monster, Lockhart. I bid you good night.”
Both of those made me laugh! :].
| Iva1201 5/18/06 . chapter 2
Have discovered this thanks to your newest Snape fic on the Fiction Alley - but as you have mentioned in one chapter it should be also here and I prefer to read the stories on (due to the better swiching between chapters - sometimes I want to reread something and at Fiction Alley it takes longer) - I review here. I have really enjoyed this - especially the first two chapters with my three favourite characters - the one with McGonagall was very sweet... I have also liked the dragon story - will it be someday also here? Or do I need to check Fiction Alley?
| Guest 11/24/05 . chapter 11
| Nienna Telrunya 3/17/05 . chapter 11
Are you *trying* to break my heart? Excellent work indeed! Try superb! Heart-wrenching! Beautiful! What can I say? I found you story, your ff name by chance, and thank goodness I did! Wow. Just wow. Exceedingly powerful.
| Aubrecia 1/16/05 . chapter 10
Absobloodylutely amazing. Definately my favorite chapter, and the beginning is beautifully written.
| DevilShoes 12/5/04 . chapter 5
oh my god! hilarious! i had to review this chapter because its just so good! the funniest thing ever! u captured lockhart beautifully and had me in stitches! LOL.
he he he he
| DevilShoes 12/4/04 . chapter 2
really liking this fic, it's offbeat, original and unusual and very well written. im only at this point at the minute but I'll read more later, i really enjoy little fics like thiese that are more a collection of stories than an entire one.
as I said, it's very well written and Im enjoying it loads, update soon!