oh my god please, please, please! update soon, i really want to know what happens, please don't kill Tris... update son Please...

im really into this story, so hurry up and update soon

How could you do this to me? I absolutly love the story. It's intersting, fasinating and compeling. You do have a lot of spelling mistakes though. I love it anyways!! Why did you just stop writing there? Please write more soon!

*to the below comment* wow. thats relevent.

A man can have sexual pleasure from a child as young as a baby. However, he should not penetrate; sodomising the child is OK. If the man penetrates and damages the child then he should be responsible for her subsistence all her life. This girl, however, does not count as one of his four permanent wives. The man will not be eligible to marry the girl's sister.

Ayatollah Khomeini

It is better for a girl to marry in such a time when she would begin menstruation at her husband's house rather than her father's home. Any father marrying his daughter so young will have a permanent place in heaven.

Ayatollah Khomeini

A man can have sex with animals such as sheeps, cows, camels and so on. However, he should kill the animal after he has his **. He should not sell the meat to the people in his own village; however, selling the meat to the next door village should be fine.

Ayatollah Khomeini
(Quotes above are from Khomeini's book, Tahrirolvasyleh, vol. 4, Darol Elm, Gom, Iran, 1990, Source: Homa)

If one commits the act of sodomy with a cow, an ewe, or a camel, their urine and their excrements become impure, and even their milk may no longer be consumed. The animal must then be killed and as quickly as possible and burned.

Ayatollah Khomeini

(From The Little Green Book: Sayings of Ayatollah Khomeini, Political, Phylosophica, Social and Religious, with a special introduction by Clive Irving, ISBN number0-553-14032-9, page 47 Source: Homa)

Eleven things are impure: urine, excrement, sperm...non-Moslem men and women...and the sweat of an excrement-eating camel.

Ayatollah Khomeini

I am so glad you updated, i cant wait to see more, great developments! ^_-

dont go too fast into the romance thing cuz dene it gets kinda weird... but otherwise i think it has a good story plot. =) wow u hav a lotta reviews!! this story must b really good...

Well, it was good, but short. I mean we wait forever for a chapter... j/k! It actually took me a moment to figure out what Desidemona was saying, or to even try and translate. You might want to watch out with your verb tenses and make sure they match. That is all for now, though I wouldn't mind longer chapters.

Hey glad to see you're back updating. I really like this story, but I want to know what's happened to Tris? Please update again soon as this story rocks!

Um, i dont know if you've changed this maybe, but after a person talks, it generally ens like this: 'Person talks,' he said. No capitals on he and she saids, and generally it's a comma not a full stop if you end in 'he said.'

What about Tris?

Muslima, your story is not HORRIBLE, although you could work on your grammar and spelling. I've seen far worse. I like the story, if I didn't, I wouldn't have it in my favorites. I liked this chapter but please don't use alternate font for Desidemona *spelling?*. It's hard to read. Very interesting and I'm glad you updated!

*grumbles* freaking system, won't let me sign in...anyways. Good update, you need some serious help with your spelling and grammar, though. I would suggest a beta reader (not myself, you'll have to find one on your own but I can suggest one if you like) but if not just pay closer attention to the grammar part of 'spelling and grammar check' on Word or Works. Whichever it is you use. Nice characterization. Update soon!
~CB~

O.O What's going to happen? Yay! There's more. How exciting...but what's going to happen?

Are you gonna continue this?