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Well well. It's a good fic and I'm gonna have to read more.

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I eat Books, Stories and words. I'm hungry, do you know any thing good.

Father son relationships touch the heart! *sniff* I feel so warm inside when I read these! *Sighs contentedly* plz r&r my stories if you get the chance...

it was a good story thank oyu

Hi, again. Just a tip. You might want to go back and add something of how Sirius was cleared or something. Otherwise he would have been imediately arrested upon entering St. Mungo's. The more I read the better it gets as far as including details. There are still some sketchy places such as the one I just mentioned. Most can be assumed though. Keep it up, I enjoy reading your work.

ah well, to be 100% honest, I was expecting Harry to have an asthma attack in divination. After all he and Lei did comment on all of the smoke and perfume and things in that room. Oh well, maybe it's something that either happens later or could be added. Just an idea if you ever decide to revise.

Hi! From one first time writer to another, I love your story I really do. HOWEVER - hehe, there are some areas that I feel that you are skipping that should be covered. It just leaves things a little more understandable for the reader. I noticed it in the previous story as well, but not as obvious.

For example; if Severus just found out earlier in the day from a letter that Lily had sent Remus, how did Dumbledore find out? did Sev. tell him? Did he already know? If he already knew then why wasn't he the one to tell them instead of Remus? Also in the last story or the begining of this one, I think you may need to make more of a reference to the actual change in Harry's appearence. I commend you on the subtle comments but to be honest I had to really think back to remember the small reference to his change of height and hair length.

I love the story line and where this is going, as well as your own personal twists in the characters personalities. I think if you just added a tad more detail in some areas this story would be awesome. Please take this as constructive criticism and keep up the good work.

I like this story. Now to look for a sequel...

That was a good chapter.. but I must sleep. Hopefully I will return tomorrow.

That was a good chapter... now to read the rest.

Graet story. I loved it. I am on to your next story. Please kep up the great work.

If I had caring parents that I could go to when I had bad dreams or just plain scared. I would have didn't too. No matter how old I am.
Great chapter LOve all your stories. Please keep up the great work.

I do not think it is cheesiest. I think it is cute. Great story and great chapter. Please kep up the great work.

This is an awesome story!

Draco's B-day is my B-day as well! I really love it and I can't stop reading it!