HOW DARE YOU DEFY POKEMON! FINISH!

omg shawna, i honestly think you need to continue writting this story, it's just as good as wicked game or stoey is leaving me on the edge of me seat(like always). i love how you made the stroy make sense, you started from the begining before ash and gary started on their quest. this story sounds so real, like all of this really did happen in the cartoon. Your thurst for great detail makes it even better. i also love how you have Gary in love with Aurora. im not tellin you all of this to be a kiss ass, i really think this is the greatist srory besides wicked game. well g2g,i'll talk to ya later

luv your crazy cuz,

Ashley

i like this story very much! i was considering asking you if i could continue this story but i wouldnt be such a good writer i do have one story i am writing and i would say it is doing fairly well. so if you dont mind could i comtinue this fanfic? i wouldnt be able to start for a while but i would love to try!

cool dude!

Great story. Love the way Kadabra 'talks' to Arurora. LOL )

Excellent, I completely admire this story. I am very anxious to read what's coming next.

Wow! This story is really coming out to be great! I really hope you make more episodes, because I just cannot wait!

Hmm... interesting...

Add story to favorites: *click!* This is really good. I kinda hope Ash and some others make more appearences.

whazzap? it's kelsey. like the story so far, but i think aurora is too perfect. how the monkey did she make a bed for an onix? AAGH! ok. whatever.

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Whoa! Great stories! Much better than mine!

(I'm also a member of the UPM!)

hehehe! Can I preview yr next one. . .now that your at our message board?

Waaaaahhh! Poor Clefairy!

heheHeHeHEHE!