really good and in character writing of their perspective.

This was very beautiful...Very emotional and moving. I rather like this one :)

(p.s. It's me! D. HeAd! Well, I've changed me pen-name, so it's D. Wisdom (the 'D' is for 'DeadHead,' by the way!)

-Your Friendly Neighbourhood Pete Wisdom Ficcer, D. Wisdom :D

Ooh... luv it!

Very good. I like the POV angle. It's fun to get into characters heads.

Nice story! It's fun reading a story from a character's point of view, to know their thoughts and feelings. Oh by the way, I'm writing another 'Things XF People Would Never Say', and feel free to submit some lines to me, I'll give you credit, just leave your name...keep writing.

interesting and well-written perspectives :)