SEQUEL SOON!

Wow! This story is one of my favorites! Keep up the good work, the resolution scene was nicely written and it was awesome. You could definitely feel the conflicts that Obi(sigh) and Qui had. I can't wait for the sequal!

Wow.

A fitting end. Good job. :)

*begins to wait impatiently for the sequel*

*sniff* Hurry up with that sequel :)

This chapter totally blew me away!

Best reconciliation scene I've ever read!

Excellent...it really knocked my socks off!

Can't wait for the sequel. This great fic is gonna be hard to top, but I'm sure you'll succeed!

awwwwwwwww that's so sweet!i still think Qui was a total jerk but i like the fact that he knows Obi will never be HIS obi wan anymore.I also loved the 'i so want to let u off the hook line', that was really cute and so Obi wanting to forgive him for his faults.I will be waiting impaitently for the squeal so get it out soon!i just wanted to say this is one of the best fics i've ever read and say thanks for ride, it was great!ur really talented so if u write more fics i'll definetely read and the squeal gonna be about the evil little prat known as Anakin?interesting to see wat happens to him.*cough, painful death, painful death*anyway u rock!go u!

Great story, good resolution between the two. Woohoo! Pleeeease write more about Adi and Obi! Pleasepleaseplease. :) you did damn fine for a first time story.

So now Anakin knows his Master is a liar, and not the all powerful Jinn, now he knows why Obi-wan is the way he is around Qui-gon. I can hardly wait for the next chapter, but I'm dreading it cause it's the final one, will you have a sequel? 7

So the Dark Times are finally in with write more Obi/Qui angst soon.

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I really enjoyed this chapter! Keep updating

Amazing Mel! Really. I am so glad that you decided to do this as well, I think you have many fans that would agree. You have real talent. I love your wording and the way you take your time to set everything up.

The part with Anakin getting angry with Obi in the cockpit when he realized he wouldn't be piloting was ingenious. What a way to show us the little brats true colors! And you did it so well. The part with Qui and Obi in the cockpit was done very well too. Qui, I swear knows how to goad our Obi. Obi wouldn't have gotten so out of control if it werent for Qui's comments. Obi was right of course, but he didn't like how he handled himself.

The last part with Anakin was a shocking and sweet surprise. What dark little thoughts he has running around in that twisted little mind of his. How are you going to end this? I can't wait to find out and I absolutely can't wait for the sequel. Another great post Mel!

-Shan

WOW such a good story! I'm glad I founded until now, heh heh i hate having to wait for it to be updated. but don't worry take as long as you need to make the resolution! and i'm looking forward to the sequel.

just ONE more? What? No. No no no no NO! There so much more you need to address in this story and you can't do it all in one more chapter.

No no, you'll need to write more! Yup, more writing is what you need to do. :)

Of course, if it is the end, then you'll have to write a sequel. Yup, a sequel!

We'll be waiting.

All I can say is WE NEED MORE ASAP!

I'm hanging . . . and its torture! ;)

Everything seems to be coming to a head. I'm REALLY looking forward to the next part. :D And take all the time you need to make it perfect - quality is more important than speed. :)

*sits a computer and fidgets, waiting impatiently* ;)