 Stv1 1/2/01 . chapter 1What a terrible fic! Complete and utterly rediculous!
No, I kid, great Job, Sabs! I'm slowly starting to the read the H. Potter ones know, lol. See you on the board this week. |
 Christa the Ice Priestess 10/24/00 . chapter 1wow
i'm not a fan of jar jar, but this might change my opinion |
 Jessica 10/22/00 . chapter 1A great story, keep up the good work! |
 hey i e-mailed u before 9/22/00 . chapter 1 hey i luv this story. u said u continued ti, but i forgot where. this is, by the way, one of the very best jar jar stories out there. |
 uh-huh 9/9/00 . chapter 1 nice. |
 waiting4morning 6/10/00 . chapter 1Wow! I really enjoyed this story about Jar Jar's past. You have a real talent for writing. Everything seemed exactly what we would see if Lucas had showed us more of Gungan culture. Keep writing, I'm liking every story of yours that I read. :) |
 Callista 6/8/00 . chapter 1 Pretty good! |
 Arwen 4/11/00 . chapter 1 Cool. And you managed to keep the Gungan-speak good. |
 Brolliks 4/11/00 . chapter 1 (Review for all the parts) Truly outstanding work, and one of my favorite Jar Jar fanfics of all time. I can't wait for more of this quality work! |
 Dark Sentinel 4/11/00 . chapter 1 This Fan-Fiction is one of the most interesting pieces of work I have read in quite a while. It's interesting how the author can come up with a beginning of a character's life and be able to continue their story throughout The Phantom Menace, and still use the same characters. |