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| Kokoro Sabishii 2008-04-17 ch 1,  | abuseHm, this is a very interesting idea, why not continue it? It has a lot of potential as a plot, and judging from this first chapter, your writing is advanced enough to really make something of it. I'll add it to my story alerts and hope for an update! Eagles may soar but weasels will never be sucked into jet engines. Kokoro ^_^x |
| Onyxlight 2007-05-12 ch 1, | abuseOff to a nice start :o) |
| Sesshoumaru Minion 2007-02-16 ch 1, | abuseI like this story, I love stories with Sesshoumaru taking after his baby brother! |
| Northern Star 2006-06-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseJust wondering but what happens to Inuyasha's tail? You never mention him having one in "The White Dog" even during the swiming part. Yet in this story and in "The Birth of a Son" you allude to one so where did it go and will it come back? |
| TrisakAminawn 2006-03-15 ch 1, | abuseO.o But wasn't continued, I notice, as was not The White Dog. Have you gone away, Becky? What a shame... |
| theLilyLady 2006-02-23 ch 1, | abuseAH! that is so sweet! i really love that you arn't making Sesshomaru a bloodthirsty bastard. But in your story [The White Dog], where's Rin??!? I mean, it's ok if she's not 'in' the story, but i'm just curious. |
| Kitsune no Yuuki 2006-02-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good! |
| unattainable 2006-02-08 ch 1, | abuseplease, please update soon? as well as your other story, the white dog...i don't think its finished yet unless that's the ending? you're a fantastic writer, your syntax and word choice is very natural yet very good, and unlike most authors when you write teh "mushy" stuff you don't overdo it or make it unbearable. it's really amazing! by the way, you know how sesshomaru's mother wear's makeup (in the white dog) to hide her aging? well when she's in her youkai form does the makeup stay, or does it transform into "dog" makeup--dirt or something? or does it go away and then wouldn't she prefer being human even though i know looks don't really matter? and by the way, youkai just sounds like "monkey" for some reason to me. i think "monkey!" whenever i hear the word in any of your stories. funny. |
| snowy 2006-01-03 ch 1, anon. | abusegreat fic! |
| alaskanwoman25 2005-12-18 ch 1, | abusethis is really good |
| Warrior of Forest 2005-12-15 ch 1, | abuseI love this whole series, and this part is one of my favorites. Your Sesshomaru is simply wonderful. The dog society is complex and well thought-out, far beyond most that are on this server. Keep up the good work! |
| angel-kamui 2005-09-08 ch 1, | abuseI'm reading The White Dog and I stopped for a moment to see what other stories you had and found this side story. This first chapter is nicely done, I like it. Please update soon. |
| Midnight Promise 2005-08-21 ch 1, | abuseI feel so sorry for Sesshoumaru, his father, you think, could have some more time with him and not allow Sesshoumaru's mother around. I mean HE IS THE TAIYOUKAI! Anyway, you better hurry up and update! Great job, loved it. ^_^ AnimeFreakSlayer |
| The Syco 2005-06-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh! I love it! Is there more? You have no idea just how much I love stories where Sess and Inuyasha AREN'T trying to tearing eachother's throats out. I hope you have more up your sleeve. A wunnerful ficcy! |
| trallgorda 2005-06-01 ch 1, | abuseThis so rocks!! |