Your stories are always fabulous, and this one was no exception. It gave a lot of depth and insight to the life of the Outland lions. I also have to say that the ending completely surprised me. Great job!

Wow, i loved the way u told that story! It made it feel real, like that's what should have happened.. Keep up the god work, I hope to read some more of these kinds of stories!

LOl I loved this, it was really funny. I think it is the only TLK fanfic I have read that didn't hav Scar in it, but you made references to him alot so I loved it all the same. Great twisted ending, go Nuka! ALthough Vitani's idea was deliciously evil, which I loved too. Good to see a fairly nice side of Zira too. It would have been better if Vitani took the heir title tho, I don't really like Kovu :P
Anyway, awesome story! Favourited :D

Very good, I thought. There were a few spelling and grammatical errors, and some words I wondered about, but overall I liked it. I think it captured everyone's respective characters nicely and just reinforced how much I like Vitani x3

verii good storii. luved it from start 2 finish. good ending by the way

Why in the world did you give yourself one star? I thought it was amazing!

I love this. The best LK fic I've ever read!

Very nice story! Poor neglected Kovu. Maybe I shall bookmark this page... *thinks* Yeah. I shall.

Hehe. Sibling rivalry. I can relate to that.

You know, Vitani is very cute as a cub! *huggle*

Vitani: Lemme go! I gotta go see Kovu!

Vitani_Fan: *releases* Fine. BE that way.

Vitani: *rolls eyes* Finally! Kovu, get over here! *runs off*

I enjoyed this story, by a very talented writer. Kitani is my favorite character, and above all this portrays Kitani, I think, very well. I'd love to see more wirtings by this author.

Very good story. I always hoped for another film about Vitani and Kovu. You have a very good story telling mind. Thanks for the story. Paul

wow! i really really liked this! was this a one shot? wow. just wow. so great! you should really be a professional writer! wow! i love your works! this is going on my fav. storys list.

"Quiet, Kovu!" Zira snapped. "Out of my way, both of you. Mother needs to think."

that was a funny like. mother needs to think. that's hahalarious. lol sorry, that's my joke. anyway. great job, and hey! read my chapter 10! please? ok bye!

Wow... nice one. I wish you would continue it.

that was the best story i have ever read about Zira,Kovu,Nuka and Vitani,because the outsiders are best!

Another of your great stories! Good job!

One word....Lame!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Don't Tempt me or I'll write a lion king one...

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