Hmmm... I'll be honest... I didn't like Frank either... How he was accepted as a firefighter, I'll never know... But with that said... The fact that he was trying to go straight, made me feel bad for him, when Sally hit leg-it-mode.

Adam's predicament made me Chortle though, Sort of reminds me of something Vaseline would've gotten up too. XD.

A good story mate, I enjoyed it. It was well written, funny, tense and depressing - In a good way. Good job mate. Ta very much for posting.

Dan F

hhm u ever heard of the fan fiction THE BIRTHDAY KISS?/ ures sounds extremely familar, just a few words here n there missing and a little bit different story line still obvs

Great story Kaz! Nice to see a light-hearted story (Adam/Rob) alternated with a more serious story (Sally/Frank).