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Reviews for: An Accidental Coincidence
Ichiknee 2/2/01 . chapter 1
I liked it. You may of wondered about the ending, but I thought it was cute. I can just imagine a 6yr old saying something like that. I also think that an adult's curiousity would cause the father to ignore her and ask again. All in all, really good story.
YumeNoYona 12/8/00 . chapter 1
wonderful! i love it! just like the show!keep it up.
Melodey 11/3/00 . chapter 1
Good story. Its just like a real episode. Great job. I don't want to be mean or anything, but just a suggestion: Next time you might want to proof read before you upload your fic even if you had someone beta-read, because you might have made a typing error. In your story, there were a lot of times when 2 words were stuck 2gether because you forgot to add a space. But thats ok, cause we all make mistakes, I just noticed that it happened a lot. But other than that your story was really good! I hope to read more of your stories in the future. :o)
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