Wow, this story ran the gamut, that's for sure. The plot was intricate, and quite plausible. Julio's aunt was wonderful! I only know a little Spanish but I figured out what she was saying.

Your settings were very vivid: the squalid hotel room (gah!), the cozy home where Michael convalesced, the abandoned trailer park. Everything set just the right mood.

And yay, for a happy ending. )

Well done, all around.

I have this in Hard copy which makes it easier to read, you have got a lot of talent. like to read more later

Vega,
I just had to write you a quick note to say how much I am enjoying reading your Knight Rider stories. They are very well written. I found, Face in the Mirror to be full of suspense with excellent characterisation.
Thanks for writing.
Gumnut.

Great story! You seem very talented. Keep on writing more

This was quite possibly one the best written stories that I have ever read for this series. Absolutely spectacular.

But the one thing that you could have done was given a translation for the Spanish parts.

Still, excellent story.

I applaud you.

I liked reading was really good.I hope you write more story's this good.I would like to read them.

*applause* Well written with great characterization and lots of emotion all around! Keep up the great work and have a great day!

As a huge fan of the Knight Rider series, I have to say this was a GREAT piece of fan fiction I've just read. Wow - this story had more serious drama and depth than any of the episodes of the actual TV series itself except maybe for the original two-hour pilot, "Knight of the Phoenix". Having a guest character from the series, Julio, was a nice added touch. Great job!

Another masterpiece, but that isn't nothing new for you. You are very talented. I always look forward to reading your fics.