This was cute... top quality place holder i must say, ;)

the only error i could find in the whole thing was this (and really, it's a funny typo ^_^)

" I had already told Jess to hold the [[fork]] at the diner"

i hink you meant to say Fort (but hey i could be wrong)

anywho, this was lovely, and i'm happy you've reached the magical 7 mark...

This was cute... top quality place holder i must say, ;)

the only error i could find in the whole thing was this (and really, it's a funny typo ^_^)

" I had already told Jess to hold the {{fork}} at the diner"

i hink you meant to say Fort (but hey i could be wrong)

anywho, this was lovely, and i'm happy you've reached the magical 7 mark...

you're adorable =). i loved the rain motif, especially the description in the third paragraph. i would have like to see a bit more lit action, but besides that your dialogue is right on target and true to the show.. great job.

That was really well written, and I think it works really well as just a short one-chapter thing. I especially liked the ending! Great job!!

~Arianna

more. definately!

Hey,
I was searching through fics and your name caught my eye, cuz I reamembered reading it from Jewls' fic. She's told me what a great writer you are and I decided to check this out. It IS great. Well written banter that is typical of the show, if not better. I especially love the bit about the petting zoo. Can't wait till the summer to read more of your stuff. I know the whole school work bit. Happening to me too. I will keep my eyes open. Kudos.
Keep smiling,
Gnat

P.S. Check out my gg fic or any of my stuff when you have the time. I would love to hear your opinion.

That was pretty fun, although I would have liked L & L's first date to be a little more momentous. And now, after 8:00 at the Oasis, I guess I want a less snarky Jess, but I know you wrote this before a long time before that, so never mind, I don't know why I even said that. I enjoyed your story, and I'm going to have a look at your other work.

well, this sucks. it really sucks. it;s horrible and it sucks. it's all out of charcter and so badly written. How dare you inflict this crap on the good people of ff.net. you suck!

hi! I didn't know that you wrote another story until I checked my favorite author's list. As always, great job. You have such a gift in expressing the characters. Anyway, thanks also again for your support for my Harry Potter story. Hope you're enjoying the book and don't forget to go see the movie, coming out November 15!! best of luck to ya!

i love love love your stuff, and i'm not going to put a period in this review just for you, anyways, just wanted to say i loved it, and your writing is amazng, yu are the god of the fanfiction world :)PLEASE write more...you have to write a season three, but that can come next season, is suppose..i guess i'll have to put up with watching the real gilmre girls while you're on hiatus...hahaha, thanks again for a great summer break!

that was soooo good! r u goin 2 keep going?

I can't believe this is the last we'll be hearing from you, but I know what you mean about writing during the school year. As usual this story was excellent. :-) I really don't know how you do it but you alway leave us wanting more.

¤Kari¤

Hey, I like living inside your head. And, I baked a cake and some cupcakes today, so I don't need any more. :)
As always, an excellent story. I like the topic, too. Having a cold... hrrmmmm. I've heard a lot about colds recently. Must be going around.
Anyways, ya know I love your stuff, and I'm really sad that this is the last one. *why oh why couldn't your lucky number be something like 13?* :) Thanks for all the stuff you've written so far, and I'm so looking forward to next summer. :) Till the next time, *hug*.
melia

Hey!!! Awesome, awesome, awesome! I love it. I also read your fic "London Bridge is falling down" and I LOVED it too!!! Thanks for all you supportive reviews on my fic. I wish you would write more *hint hint*

as usual, yet another amazing story.