Very interesting premise :)
I'm seriously hating Tohma right now for being such a selfish prick. Surely hiding one's feelings is not the right thing to do..

Lovely story~ Too bad it's discontinued.

I would really like to see how this story ends. It's been a long time since this fic was updated. I hope your muse returns and that you finish such a well written & interesting story. Nobody ever seems to wonder if Shu is okay ofter what Taki did. He recovered Awfully fast for what happened to him. Granted, Gravi is full of slapstick, but so much time (esp. in manga) is spent on Erie and his troubled past that poor Shu's attack sort of gets swept under the rug. This is one of the few fics that seems to be dealing with the fact that Shu never really addressed what happened - he just sort of shoved it back & focused on Erie. Like the way the characters are wriitten - hate to see this one go unfinished. (BTW - can someone shoot Tohma please, gr... - he's so obssessed with Erie being bothered that he dumps everything on poor Shu - wonder if he ever thought that maybe Erie might be better off for helping Shu)

Hi...Why never update?

How to say how much i like this? Your writing is smooth and flowing that is just one of the things keeping my interest, I really like that you involved Suguru even though he isn't a favourite of mine not enough people do things from his viewpoint, so that was good. And Taki as well, alot show him as an ultimate badguy (which is fine) but you've given another side that works just as well. Gotta say Tohma's speech about hiding was blunt yet indirect and sounded so professional, i'm impressed. Plus all the characters are living up to what you expect and your fiction has a few weird & funny quirks to it that I do enjoy.
It really is a shame to have such a good story go to waste so any chance you'd think of continuing ths? please ^_^

this is really pretty good..but..*sniff* no update? *cries*

Wow this was a really good start and middle of a story.. its a shame you abandoned it.. thanks for posting anyways!

Nice, I can't wait to read more.

Ep! You haven't updated in nearly TWO YEARS! Please continue soon before I die of anticipation.

Wow! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Yea. I've been on a possitive comment spree...don't ask.
You have pushed me over a cliff and left me hanging! Arg!
Hope you update soon! Pls?
~Ninja No Shi

I WANNA READ MORE! haha~ nice story!

You stopped updating *wails*

well... wan to read the nxt chapter... waited 4 months..

I hope your going to update this eventually. You are getting into the heads of the whole cast.

Oh! Very, very good! Please continue with this. I'm excited to find such an original story in fanfic, and your writing is paced well - not too fast or too slow. I also like how you added Taki's take on the situation, but I admit to wanting more Yuki/Shu interaction.
Yay for purple hair! ^_^

Um, don't know quite what to add here that wasn't in the other reviews, but I guess a little request wouldn't be too horrible. Could we get more Yuki/Shuichi time? I feel bad for the boys and I think they should have some quality time before the inevitable torture, please? Ignore if you already have your plot laid out.