Very cute :)
Love the characterization!

haha that was really funny. Please update soon!

aw how cute really loved it update soon unless it's finished...I didnt notice if it was or not well any who keep up the good work

Aw... why, why, WHY didn't you continue that scene?! Why?? -Tries to glare- No, I can't glare right now. I am smiling too much after reading this. They are so CUTE. Thank you for making them cute! The scene where Shuichi tries to pick Yuki up is most certainly one of the sweetest and loveliest scenes I have ever had the pleasure to read. And it'll be even better once you continue that scene the next chapter... just even a little bit... come on...

Anyway, thank you again. You really have a gift for writing these characters; they are incredibly true to themselves. I think you should replace the semi-colons in the first sentence with commas, but that's the only grammatical error that stood out to me. So, a brilliant chapter in all areas. Looking forward to the next!

Nice! I've been waiting for an update on this! I LOVE this story :) Nice chapter :)

Wow. Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one!

Hahaha! This chapter made me giggle a lot XD
Verryy clever :DD!

great but too much deatail

Nice fic, very funny. I'd always wondered what would happen if shuichi got a driver license.

Bwahahaa! I'm loving this story :B
Take as much time you need to update

omg this is such a great story! the droplettes of sarcasm make this so funny and realistic! I can totally see this happening lol poor yuki! he probably has to deal with ** like this on a daily basis. Nicely written :) keep up the good work :)

I really like this. Tone, characterisations, everything. You've described how Yuki can be compassionate and loving without a complete breakdown of his personality, as the manga does. This story achieves excellency in all areas and I hope to see more of in the future (hint hint).

The one qualm I have with this is simple: why are Yuki and Shuichi not getting any action? The scene where Yuki fell asleep and was subsequently teased by Shuichi was incredibly and sweet and funny, but still... However most of my grieving over this issue was interrupted by the wonderful line, ""I know he is manipulating me, sort of" confesses Alice - I mean Shuichi." Too funny.

Anyway, love it so far! Thanks for updating despite your problems.

come on write some more!!

nice cliffhanger, dude. i almost, take note: almost, wished a painful death over it. hope you'll continue this soon.

this is really good! funny! please update soon! thanks!