I totally agree with what the first reviewer has to have a leaves you hanging but, other than that I thought it was written 't wait to see if theres a sequel.

I REALIZE THAT THIS IS PART OF A BIGGER STORY, BUT FOR ME IT JUST LACKED SOMETHING. IT DEFINITELY CAN'T STAND ALONE WITHOUT OTHER PARTS AND I TAKE IT THAT THIS WAS THE ORIGINAL GOAL OF THE WRITER.