This was such an adorable and beautifully romantic fic-Great work :)

A couple of things: your grammar is good and you have a great story idea, however, you are lowering the intelligence level of your readers and yourself by using the email format. A story like this needs proper formatting and it seems like you are avoiding the whole writing proccess by doing it this way. Also, you need to work on character development, you can tell that you are writing from your age group and that is not the age of the characters. For example, thirty-year-old men do not put smiley faces in their e-mails...they just don't. Smiley faces in general are highly frowned upon anyway, but especially coming from a thirty-year-old man. It's really bad karma.

This was great! But, is it really finish.

Wow. That was too cool. You should write another one in the same style. I mean it.

Cool.

Draconious

This is truly original. I loved it.

Great job, this is such a cute and funny little fic! I thought it was a very orginal idea using emails to convey the action of the story. I love the fact that you used Clark and Lana in there too. Great job!

This fic was great - a very original twist on the ChLex shipper which was superbly done. Your characterisation was wonderful and really came shining through, even when the story is written in such a quirky style... e-mail can often be an impersonal form of communication and the fact that you managed to convey so much is a credit to your strong writing style. Can't wait to read more of your work

What a cute story. I love smiling at these quirky happy pieces:)

This was great - I really enjoyed it. Well done!

This is a very hard way to write a story and you're doing an admirable job of it. Keep up the good work.

hehe. LL. nice one

Oh yayness! I loved how you explained the telephone conversation through the e-mail... very smart;)

Another wonderful chapter! I can't wait to read the next one! One small thing though, as fun as the emailing back and forth between your characters is, do you think you can write some real world chapters? Maybe it's just me, but the email thing is getting a bit repitious. Anyway, sorry to nag, keep up the great work! Chlexyness rules!

I just had the crappiest day and this story just fixed it all...you're an amazing writer thank you for sharing your gift.

First new concept of a fanfic I've read, and am seriously enjoying it. Please update soon :)