Presentation 8/10

You just gave me the poem. No frills or anything. Not bad.

Visual 9/10

A heart-torn Asuka Jr. I see.

Sound 10/10

Nice use of words. It was awe-inspiring.

Awards 3 out of 10

Innovative Design- You took quite a different approach to the Saint Tail fanfic then what I've read before.

Hardcore Difficulty- You have to really be in the know of the Saint Tail story to write this. And true fans will easily catch on too. Plus it looked hard to come up with this.

Audio Award- When read aloud it sounds good.

Final Score 9/10 "A-"

Nice. I an official fan now.

Izumi

Poetry. Sheer Poetry. _ (I just love poems!)

"Which did he want? The reality at his side or the dream eluding him at night? "

Wow, its like poetry. I loed that line, the whole thing was wonderful, but I loved that line.

I love stories with prayer. I have one under my name.

God bless you.

I'm adding this story to my fav. stories list, and you to my fav. authors.

One word...Beautiful!