Really nice story. I enjoyed it!

Er... I recommend that you FINISH the manga before writing a story that takes place after it.

Cute! Me loved it! That was great!

What'd Marron give her anyway?

Very cool! At this point, I feel sorry for Viande.

Marron: Didn't you feel sorry for him from early on?

How'd u figure?

Marron: You told me. . . . .

Oh. . . . yeah. . . ._;;

Marron: *rolls his eyes*

Yeah, I felt sorry for Viande early on, because he loves Cerise and all. But now he killed himself! It's so sad. But the swordfight was kinda cool.

Marron: Right. . . . well, she enjoyed this story.

Yeah I did! Keep it up!

AAAH! NO! BAD PLACE TO STOP! ARGH! WANNA SEE THE FIGHT! *dies*

Marron: O.O;;; You are rather impatient, aren\'t you?

Yes...very... X_X

Marron: Well, in any case, you\'re going to have to wait.

*pouts* I hate waiting.

Marron: Don\'t you do the same thing to your readers, thou? I mean, you write short chapters too.

Yeah...good point...neway, keep it up, and update as soon as possible.

Marron: You have to say the magic word.

...Please...

Marron: Good.

OMG! they met again! uh oh... viande is gonna get so pissed... keep going!

OMG! THat was sooooooooooo sad! ;-; Poor Marron-san. I loved how u convey his emotions...especially that he barely shows any. i also love the little scene with carrot-san comforting marron-san. it was soooooo cute! hurry and update soon!

Wow, I guess that I haven't written a review for this yet... hmmm, let me remedy that. -

Some of the storyline is a little contrived, ya know, teh love at first sight concept, but you manage to save this point by the physical relationship developing slowly (No jumping into bed at the first chance, ne?) Aside from that, the concept of two different magic types is interesting, and in the Sorcerer Hunters world, a little refreshing. I can foresee much Marron angst with the death of Gateau and the loss of his newly found 'petite amie'

Also, for those interested, about a comment made in the reviews about Sirius's name being a food... I find it more accurate to say that Sirius is punned off the star Sirius in the constellation of Canis Major. The rest of the Platina Stone guardians have starry names... Altair(Artail in the manga, but in hirigana it's the same symbols) in the constellation of Aquila, Vega in the constellation of Lyra, Kengyu Kiba (Ummm... okay, I'm stumped on this one... does anyone else know?), and Deneb in the constellation of Cygnus. It seems that with the villians, Akahori-sama used other things besides foods, like gemstones, colors, etc.

Anyway, it's an interesting story and I'm hoping to be able to read more of it soon.

*sob* How could u? First, u kill Gateau (even if i don't like him that much, i respect him enough), then u take Cerise away from Marron-san? r u trying to make him miserable?

Marron: U do that to me all the time.

...well, ya, but a story isn't a story without main character torture.

Marron:...

so i guess i can't be too mad at u...but please hurry! i wanna read more!

i know I don't usually give threats but... *pulls out newly aquired tessen and prods annie with it* write more. Now. Thank you! :D

hehe... Carrot shouldn't mess with Marron's girl, it could be hazardous to his health... thats now my favorite part! hehe, oh thats great... now for next chappie...

uh-oh...they're in trouble!... very nice _ me still like!

that was cute! really sweet! me likies! _

At first, I was going to email this to you... but unfortunately, you chose to flame me in public, rather than private. I am forced thus to defend myself in public. As I told you, the author of Sorcerer Hunters originally intended the character names to be food and sex puns. The name Cerise, since it is such a pun, is also included in Sorcerer Hunters (usually written as Seiryuuse or Sirius-I believe that is where he gets his name.) I did not tell you that your intentions do not matter. I said, because of the intentions of the -original author, Satoru Akahori- this is the way your title will be received. It is a joke to insult me and then say you will keep my name anonymous when I have no fear of stating my name, as I am not flaming as you are. If you do not wish for serious responses as to the affect of your work, SAY SO. Please say, "I just want you to review with 'please write more' and nothing else" and you won't be troubled by adult responses in the future, I assure you.

very interesting. i like this. keep going!