Nyohah, you are an excellent and immensely talented writer! Although I haven't read many Mortal Kombat fanfics lately, I've read plenty of other fics from other games. And I can honestly say that your's is right up there with the best.

Your grammer is excellent, your settings, characterisations and ideas are utterly, utterly impressive.

All I can say is just keep on writing and posting fanfics!

yuAn, oops. sorry!

ok, let me start by saying that i love, love, love this fic to death. i first saw it on tygerlander's site, and have re-read it many times since. it's almost become truth for me, i can't imagine the characters here any other way. i have one nitpicky thing for you:

"I was constantly improving, and he'd tattooed a Unfortunately,..."

i know it's supposed to be something about the point of an arrow (or dart...something like that) on one sister, and the legs on the other, but i'm not sure if you meant to wipe that part out entirely or it got deleted by accident.

and, if you wanted to write more about yuen and ching, i'd love you to death for it. not that honour guard and the others aren't great, but bondage ends so sadly... i want more! :)

Whee! New chapter titles. -And there's iocaine powder! (In chapter 3). I mean, obviously it was there before, but I only just now made the connection.

And about that request? I'd be happy to ;)

wow ... love it! ending is a little bitter, but not bad. i really enjoyed reading your story. oh, love the twists too!

Wow. Great story, keep writing! This is definatly going on my favorites_.

Heh, I always thought your stuff was hella good, and now I have a chance to say so :) It was this story that kept my faith in MK going, especially after "Annihilation". And oh yeah, you use proper grammar and spelling, too :: thumbs up :: :)

Signed,

The Other Billy-Joel-Lovin'-Mileena-Chick :)

You are good. Keep writing this stuff.

Great read. Couldn't wait for the next one. I hope that you do another one from this point onwards, I also hope, since I haven't had time to look, that if you have already that you don't think that i'm an idiot.

Not a bad story, but why is it called "Bondage" for?Heh, heh, heh, heh, heh...

wow.. the 7 are great

GREAT STORY!

This was a really enjoyable story, successfully adding backstory without compromising the game's progression.