|Reviews for The Fall of the Proud|
| May-VeggieGirl12 11/5/02 . chapter 3
I like it! 10 star! It's good!
| vegtealover1 10/23/02 . chapter 3
I love this story. Please tell me when the next CH. is up!
| Firefly Solace 9/23/02 . chapter 3
AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH! Don't leave me hanging! CONTINUE! CONTINUE! *bites onto rope, gritting her teeth and growling* NEXT CHAPTER!
| OnsenSong 9/23/02 . chapter 3
Very kewl! Poor Veggie! HEHEHE! I laughed too when Nappa screamed, the bastard... Up date soon, kay? Ja ne!
| bounty 9/22/02 . chapter 2
fuck you bitch nappa isnt stupid you big fat donkey fucker! go fuck your self! NAPPA RULES ALL!
| Wind2 9/22/02 . chapter 3
oooooooooo interesting! What connection does nappa have to this? update soon so i can find out!
| Kewla 9/21/02 . chapter 2
OK, you've got my interest. What's going on? So many question, how about some answers?
| Firefly Solace 9/21/02 . chapter 2
Cool story, I love it! I love the plot-line, continue soon! I wounder who could be behind it all *curious*
| koneko 9/21/02 . chapter 2
Please go on I'm really curious to see what will happen!
| LAXgirl 9/18/02 . chapter 1
Ooooooo Interesting. I want to see more soon. I like how you're not doing the cliche of Veggie coming down with some 'deadly' virus... blah blah yadah yadah yadah, we've all read it before at some point or another.
But having some evil saiyan locked away somewhere and possibly feeding off Veggie to come back to our dimension...now that's what i'm talking about!
Keep it up! I want more more more more! PLEZ!
| OnsenSong 9/16/02 . chapter 1
First poor Veggie's sick and now Nappa! Please update soon! And read my fic "Broken Glass" and review it. It's really good! Try looking in the rated R section for it! Hey I reviewed for you! _
| SerenityZero 9/14/02 . chapter 1
That was pretty good :)
| Wind2 9/14/02 . chapter 1
dun dun duuunnnnn
mesa wants to read more! This is very interesting. why is vegeta losing is power? update SOOOOOONNNNNNN!
| Tara 9/14/02 . chapter 1
That was pretty good could youj keep going please I want to see what happened!