lol the toothpaste as foam.
that was good

heya, this is an interesting story, for a while there i didn't really like it because i was confused as to whether or not the draco who turned up was actually draco. i thought it might have been lucius disguised as draco for some reason, or something like that. but anyway, the end is great, cya later.

very very well done i must say.
the story was set up nicely right from the beginning and your writing style is spectacular. it was a bit confusing as the whole story was mystery, but i thought you rounded it up nicely at the end. one of my favorite stories- amazing.

Great story.

ok i love this story with a passion and im so dding it to my favs
but i am so confused with it
lik i get... well nothin
its so confusing
why was he good all of a souden
can u please PLEASE recap the end of chap 15 for me
thank u bunches

in chap 9
i dont get wat he tried to do to her
was he trying to choke her or something
please tell
me
and by the way
i LOVE this story

awesum story!! i loved it!! if there was more that would be even better!! great writing!!

xx
eddie

Wow! great story and absolutely a wonderful piece of writing. You have to be commended.This is definitely different from all the other HGDM fanfics that i've read.

It kept me on edge just wanting to know what would happen next. I wasn't moving my mouse fast enough.

Though i'm completely in awe of this story, I have a few questions and i am a little miffed with the situation with Harry.

Q1: how exactly did the 'good' Draco come back to life? Didn't he die?

Q2: Hermione loves Draco because of his 'desire to be good'? that's it?

Q3: Did you say in the other universe Hermione was his mistress?

Q4: What is really going on with the logoi ergum or whatever?

Q5: It said everything would go back to normal when he killed himself- Do you mean everything would go back to normal in the 'good' Draco's world only or both worlds (though I don't know how it would go back to normal in the other world of Hermione the Mistress and Draco the Bad when they're both dead)

All and all it really was a great story and i know i'll contemplate it in my head when i'm bored and i do keep feeling that twinge when I think of Harry. How sad for him. poor boy.

anyways
lots of love

I just started reading this, and while I like it, I have to say, I am thouroughly confused. Looking forward to the rest of it though. You threw quite a twist at the end there, and apparently are still doing so. Cant wait!

Nye

Good story!

I loved it !

Wow...really well thought out...I rarely review unless the story is great. The only thing that kinda made me mad was the fact that there wasn't too much closure in the end - Harry's love for Hermione, and how he was so melancholy. But anyways, that was astounding - I wasn't bored once. =)

I haven't read a story that good and that indepth in a long time! Few writer's even try to use a thought out plot in a Hermione/Draco fic. I LOVED IT!

This is good...

This was an absolutely beautiful story! I have never read something so...i don't know what to say...you definitely have my vote of approval...