This was possibly one of the most drammatic FanFics I've read yet. It was sad and intense at the same time. Great work! Really! I'm looking forward to reading more of your fics soon!

TT_TT So sad... TT_TT

To be perfectly honest, the story was too long, too stretched out, but the way you wrote it, that was what kept me reading. There're a couple of minor typos once or maybe twice, but aside from those rare thingies, there weren't any mistakes I could claw out of the woodwork.

And I don't think I've ever cried from reading a fanfic, but after that epilogue, well, my eyes stung like I'd poured Glycerine into them. I hope you're happy.

...

give me a minute to quit crying...

Yeah...

Maybe the most touching part is how they deal with it.

something about Hakkuryu sitting on Gojyo's shoulder, instead...

Man...

_melissa

...i love the angst...

The world needs more angst! _

Because you brought out "Till Loneliness..." again, I revisited the first fic I ever read. At the time I didn't know that such things existed(fanfiction that is) I thought it was canon. I was heartbroken, and in buckets of tears. Older and wiser now...this still affects me.

Do give us a heads up when you get your first book published. All my encouragement in your writing endeavours.

This is a beautifully written angst fanfic. The emotions are so intricately woven into the story. My favourite part was Hakkai's death scene *sob* (Hakkai dying...*sob*). This scene hit me hard, really hard.

A letter I sent to a friend containig this fanfiction:

Aie! He killed Hakkai to save Sanzo! That brat! Goku... killed Hakkai! He- he... and Hakkai... and... what? *is sobbing* The end... is so sad. If you don't read it all just read the final 2 chapters... hope may be lost... but the journey goes on. Wah!

(I loved the fanfiction. I love anything with Hakkai in it... even if he goes psycho and de ies by the hand of baka saru whom I hate more. I know it doesn't really happen but I can't get this out of my head. And Gojyo... I hate him too! Wondeful job! _)

Wonderful. This is a really beautiful fic, well written and all. I hope you didn't kill Hakkai but I don't think such a great ending would be made if you didn't.

This truly was one of the best fics I've ever read, out of all of them. You are a very intelligent writer and should definitely have something published. You have a lot of talent, and I thank you for giving me the ability to read such a wonderful piece.

This story is incredible. Simply incredible. I just can't stop reading it! It's so haunting, and captivating. So vivid and clear. So dark and somewhat gothic. Lovely.

Damn, you're good. This story is simply amazing. My attention never ceases to leave the screen. Word after word, it's just wonderfully written!

This chapter was very intriguing. This has to be one of the most well written Saiyuki fics that I've ever read. I thoroughly enjoyed its suspence and action as well.

Wow, this is really good. Very well written, kept in character. Poor Hakkai. He just seems so haunted.

... And I am done.

This was very nicely written. And, damn, it had to be Hakkai when he was my favorite...! But I can't really rail you on that little fact considering this is a very good story.

And I see you write a lot of Saiyuki fics. I'll be back to check them out.

... hey, did I forget to say I really liked this fic? _ Thanks again!