 Endemic 6/9/05 . chapter 1 I like it. It's simply written and very nice to read. |
 Ghostwriter155 3/2/04 . chapter 1Very good and interesting. I read bondage and I like stories involving the nijas. Very very good writing. |
 James Birdsong 9/15/01 . chapter 1 Yay story |
 Zonapoet 6/24/01 . chapter 1 Oh! I just looooovvvveeee Sub-Zero! I'm sooooo happy I found a story about him! He's THE BEST! |
 litl angel 5/13/01 . chapter 1 Nice interpretation. Can't wait to read the others |
 Rebekah Spake 10/27/00 . chapter 1 *blinks* Very interesting...I feared for the first Sub-Zero...it's nice to see him in the hands of a skilled and capable writter... |
 Darkgirl 9/6/00 . chapter 1 ooh... cool fic, although Scorpion is much better than Subzero, heh heh heh |
 Rayden 8/17/00 . chapter 1 interesting... |
 Cyberblade 8/9/00 . chapter 1 Not too shabby. |
 Rory Betteridge 5/15/00 . chapter 1 It doesn't quite seem finished... |
 homer 4/11/00 . chapter 1 continue! |