 Okuyukashii 2008-06-02 . chapter 1I love this story. It was so well written, the plot was great, the ending was enough to make anyone happy, and on top of that, the grammar was great!...sorry. I seem to like reading AU fics, now for some reason. It is so much better when they know about all the "futuristic" stuff Kagome lives with. So, yeah, amazing! |
 Frog-kun 2008-04-26 . chapter 9A very satisfying ending. So deep, so absorbing... so satisfying.
And now that I have swamped you with mindless praise for all of my reviews... SUGGESTIONS!
Firstly, I'm personally against using indents to separate paragraphs in HTML. It makes it harder to read. Double-spaced paragraphs are enough.
Possibly, more detail in the dialogue is needed. I like the fatc that you didn't drag on the story longer than it was meant to, though, so thumbs up.
I loved the different viewpoitns of love, all the uncertainties and whatnot. Made this story into a more satisfying one than it was meant to.
I look forward to reading more of your work. |
 Frog-kun 2008-04-26 . chapter 8Aww! This story really affects me in an emotional way. The situations are so realistic, so mature. You completely understand the characters... Oh!
Gotta finish the story! |
 Frog-kun 2008-04-26 . chapter 4Ha ha! Very nice story so far! I'll try and review all of it if I can. It's a very promising AU story and completely and totally MirSan! I don't see that often. Usually, MirSan is just a side pairing. People find it boring for some reason.
But I don't! I think it's fantabulous!
You've portrayed Miroku and Sango's relationship in a believable manner. I mean, believable for an AU. Some things have to change when Miroku and Sango both live in the modern era. As Miroku was not brought up a monk, obviously, he's different. Same goes for Sango.
The story that unfolds is dialogue-based, but I loved chapter 4. It stuck out to me as very emotional and I found myself relating with Sango. So cute!
I see this story isn't voluminious in length but it's effectively building up to a climax. It's structured very well in an economical manner.
I'll review some more as I read through it.
On to the next chappy! |
 virgoxvirgo 2008-04-02 . chapter 9 I've read this story like... 10 times! I love it SO MUCH! I hope you start writing Sango Miroku stories again! |
 Kiari Hyuuga 2008-02-16 . chapter 9great job love the story bunches. Good idea adding in basketball thats wat made me want to start reading it. |
 Lady of Sushi and Sugar 2006-10-22 . chapter 9Wow! I really like this story. Miroku and Sango together forever! All I can say is wow! Thank you this story just made my day. |
 animepinay18 2006-03-25 . chapter 9I love you. |
 animepinay18 2006-03-25 . chapter 8o okay. Takeda is nicer. =)...but i still dislike him. |
 animepinay18 2006-03-25 . chapter 2I LOVE THE WHOLE STORY!! but kuranoske...is really ** me off. sorry. |
 Yokai no Miko 2006-02-01 . chapter 9This was such a sweet story! I loved it! |
 Tiger 2005-12-24 . chapter 9 Very well written story. Not silly like the majority of high school AU fics. You really took time to build things and explore thoughts/emotions of the characters. The dialogue was excellent, too. You didn't resort to the same "Miroku-grope-Sango-slap" routine which becomes quite tiresome.
I didn't think Takeda sounded evil. He sounded like a nice guy who was being supportive of Sango. It's normal that Miroku would be jealous. Kagome was annoying, on the other hand (not that I'm suggesting to change her) -- I guess I'm not as idealistic as her, and Takeda seemed like he could eventually make Sango happy, if she really chose him. I guess I'm saying that I didn't find Kagome's harping on Miroku cool. Makes for the story though, doesn't it?
Anyway, thanks for the great story! |
 CTHKSI 2005-08-10 . chapter 9 Aw...:D That was soo sweet! ^_^ |
 Winter Aquamarine 2005-05-01 . chapter 9That was such a beautiful chapter. T_T I even cried a bit during Miroku's scene at the basketball court alone. But I'm glad that Miroku and Sango got there in the end... and finally realised that they were meant for each other. ^_^ |
 demonspawn666 2005-03-30 . chapter 9I'm melting...that was the cutest story I have ever read! It was so cute! Sango and Miroku...you did such a good job at portraying them. It wasn't the longest story ever...but it was perfect! Every word! This really was an awesome story! |