Damn girl! I love this!

Honeylamb,turn aperson every which way but loose,why don't ya? I'm not usually a poetry person,but those words had me squirming. They told a story all their own. I could see,feel every line,and whew,that's all I can say,whew.I have a story of mine own I'm working on an this has just put mr in the mood to write and,well just feel. Know what I poem was beautiful,sensual an just,WHEW!

Awesome poem. I'd be Taker's little slave any day!

Wow... really good. I loved it! Really intense.

Emmasj

thats so good add more soon please please PLEASE

this is a great poem. do you write any others that are like this?

if so: send them to

no offence but that was weird yet beautiful at the same time.I liked the way u describe the sex,passion and love for and w/ the undertaker in all of your stories so it up!

NOTE:im still looking 4 kane!lol!

Cool Poem I hope you write more of them.

Omgosh! I love that poem! That's how I feel about...Taker too! We are one! LoLz

great job!

mari