Oh. Snap.

You're a freaking genious when it comes to plots, you know that!!? It would be awsome if you managed to continue this.

i don't understand why this story is rated R. It is not scary enough to be rated R. So until then you may want to change the rating to T for teen. I didn't think it was scary at all

Oh, suspense!
Maxwell is my favorite Ham-ham! I can't help but feel sorry for him...*huggles Maxwell*

Woo you needs to update! This is good, and I want to keep reading very badly!

Very nice.

Aww, this was so good, and you never finished it

The story's good but write more yo!

ok...that was wierd...

CONTINUE! YOU HAVENT CONTINUED IN LIKE FOREVER!! @__@ *goes crazy* COMMON! DONCHA WANT ME TO KEEP MY SANITY!?!?! No wait, never had any, but still ^^; CONTINUE!

Alright, I read this one a while ago too, and it looks GREAT so far! And it's been months since you last updated! What happened man?!!? I really wanna know what happens next! You already killed Oxy, who's next?!?! I WANNA KNOW! Erm...'scuse, I mean please continue!

Aww, poor Oxy...

where the hell is ur "graphic scene"? u moron!

this story is **

Oh no. Something seems bad. How long is Gur'chrugoth going to listen to him?

Write more! PLEASE write more.

oohh... this is getting good... >P

Man, that was discusting and stumic churning.

awesome, keep up the good work, but please leave someone other than Maxwell alive at the end.