Gemini14 you have a very beautiful immagination... I love they way you combined both versions of the story. I can't wait to read the next chapter...

I really liked it, I just finished watching RLW again for the...I dont know, 10th time!!

Every single time I fall in love with this couple, I love when they fall in the fire Dragon Mountain, with him helding her so close *-*

Kudos for this fic, it's well written and made me laugh with the 'looks'from Ashram, right there you can sense there is no one else for him, I love the way you transmit that feeling of belonging!

xoxoxoxox
Z

I hope to see more chapters to this story at some point. Thank you for the interesting reading. I would suggest that you explain Orson's place in this story as the Bezerker spirit killed him because he could not let it go which is why the allies of Parn won at Fire Dragon mountain. He was taken over to protect Shiris. It would make for an interesting read to have some form of story to explain Orson's being alive, much like Ashram's ressurection. Grins. I like this story's flavor a great deal so far and the way you allow to some extent for the reader to determine what emotions are in the character's profile through an action or expression.
I also like the wraith twist too. Keep up the story and see it through by all means.
Now that I am jazzed I think I shall write a Lodoss tale of where Lord Ashram vanished to at the end of the tv series box set when he ran off with the MArmo remnants. good luck.
JIO

I like this story so far. It is thought out instead of hodge podge,unlike many other tales on this particular site. Although you fear that the characters are a bit out of character, I don't see it as being so. Having seen the main tv series, Pirotess does call AShram her love when they are in the disbanded councel's chamber. Although AShram does confront Wagnard in the series to tell him that he is taking the remnants of the Marmo people away, I could indeed see Ashram, with his new found drive to protect the MArmo people who have not been butchered do something like thrust soul crusher through the snake of a wizard. He also thanks Parn at the end of the series for teaching him to respect the commoners so saving Spark is not out of character at all. However, Spark is the prince of Flaim in the tv series, so you might want to make certain that you put details that this is a different Spark into the story as it progresses.
I noticed grammer errors, but it appears that you have done a spell check, or know your spelling which is a great relief. I would like to suggest setting each chapter aside for a few days then rereading with a fresh perspective to correct grammer or repeat ideals or cliched writing such as all authors indulge in to bring out the strength in your writing and make it more fluid.

Very interesting, i've only just found you're story today and i'm thoroughly enjoying it. It's great keep it up.

Please update soon

Please Update soon this story is interesting

Please update soon this story is awesome!

please update soon!

I love it please update soon i wanna know what happens.

I love it. Too bad he-who-can't-wield-a-sword and his bony screechy chick showed up, though. I hope you have a website with more Pirotess stuff... *is hopeful*

Update it!! PLEASE!! I really like it!!

update! update! update! it's very nice! and cute! you're good! update! please?

If there is more chapters to this please update!

So what if it IS ooc, it's still a great fic, rite? :P Pls update soon ;)